Don't Assume

Flam's life has gotten complicated. His brother is a mess, his marefriend is overly emotional, and the only thing he can do to restore his sanity is to take a long walk. Unfortunately, he finds himself on the brink of a horrible past mistake...

(This can be a sequel, or a prequel, or an at-the-same-time-as fic for Three Steps Back. You don't necessarily have to read it to understand what's happening here.)

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Sir Barton

Sir Barton #1 · Jul 3rd, 2015 · 1 · ·

Good one-off Sue, wonderful combination of conversation and introspective description.

The Princess Rarity

The Princess Rarity #2 · Jul 5th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Woop! You never disappoint, do ya, Susie? And I love how wonderfully in character you got Cranky. *high fives*

howard035

howard035 #3 · Jul 5th, 2015 · · ·

Nice. Makes me wish Flam had been at the wedding, next to the changling.

SusieBeeca

SusieBeeca #4 · Jul 7th, 2015 · 2 · ·

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Cranky was SO much like my grandfather that getting his 'voice' wasn't too hard One of the many things I love about fanfic is that you can let characters cuss if they feel like it.

6169577

Why next to the changeling? Because they're both ~~persona non grata~~ equi non grati?

howard035

howard035 #5 · Jul 7th, 2015 · 1 · ·

6176070 Pretty much. Though now that I think about it, if I was a changling who didn't really understand pony society, I might try and find a cunning traveling salespony, offer my empathic services in exchange for a cover, and pass myself off as his identical twin, so there's an easy template to copy at hand at all times...

SusieBeeca