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chief maximus


Why do I write? Because I can't draw! I write mainly as an outlet, and don't take it too seriously. If you like what I write, awesome! If not, that's cool too.

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The alternate timelines visited by Twilight Sparkle during her showdown with Starlight Glimmer were shown only for a moment. But what is a day in the life like for her former friends and neighbors? This series peers into the lives of those living without the magic of friendship to brighten their world.


Rainbow & the Pie sister's story to come next chapter!

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Is that maybe supposed to be "Season Five Finale"?

You already know I love these stories! Keep up the great work!

6833476 ha, wow, all that editing, and I missed the obvious. good catch.

6833567 This is what happens when you have someone with ADD, dyslexia, and LD edit for you

The fic I'm reading Spark Visions of Twilight http://www.fimfiction.net/story/305096/spark-visions-of-twilight
features Twilight making commentary about the alternate timelines, namely that all the alternate timelines "want" to become as much like the real time line as possible, thus events will conveniently to facilitate it. This seems to be the example of that, each time line heading toward an Equestria similar to the "real" one. Thus Sombra is doomed to failure, and Nightmare may come to forgive Celestia and free her of her own volition. I kind of see Celestia in the universe where Nightmare rules having planned out her own defeat certain that Luna would eventuality come to her senses and free her, being willing to wait how ever long it took and sure her ponies would endure.

Somehow Furiosa Rarity really works, I gotta say.

I am the man, who grabs the sun... RIDING TO VALHALLA!!!!

WITNESSES ME BLOODBAG!!! WITNESS ME!!!!!!!

she's like the pony version of John Milton's Satan.

So far, so good. On my watchlist now.

I love the fics like this that show Nightmare Moon as actually being Luna rather than possessed by the ridiculous parasite the comics have everyone thinking the Nightmare is. Until it's said in the show, Nightmare Moon will never be anything but a jealous, power-hungry Luna. I'd personally like to see more of Rarity and Nightmare Moon/Luna's relationship in perhaps a sequel set in the Eternal Night world. I think Rarity/Luna is a really cute pairing. :raritywink:

I didn't know that griffons could no-scope so well... :pinkiegasp:

6835765 I omitted the part where she did a 360 before the shot, and then teabagged sombras corpse while calling him a faggot. I'll have to put that in the directors cut.

Did I already favorite this? Don't care, have another.

I'm especially fond of the second installment. Many an author has tried their hand at making Nightmare Moon sympathetic, but few have done it as well as you.

6842986 thanks! I felt she had a soft side, I just wanted to expose it while keeping her in character.

This story is amazingly written, I first must say. The only problem I have is that before Rarity introduces herself with her real name to Mac, he refers to her as her real name many times. Was that meant to be or just an accident?

While I cared not for the previous chapter (I liked Mad Max, but that crossover just didn't sit well with me for some reason), this one was great, and earned my like and follow.
Keep up the good work, whenever you can :twilightsmile:

When will the next chapter be released?

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