Under the Waves

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MrB

MrB #1 · Jun 4th, 2015 · 3 · ·

that was something else, I like it

RageCraft5862

RageCraft5862 #2 · Jun 4th, 2015 · · ·

you sir, are right
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MrB

MrB #3 · Jun 4th, 2015 · · ·

6054984 thank you

seventeen

seventeen #4 · Jun 28th, 2015 · 3 · ·

Play with fire and you're gonna get burned. Who knew Sunset Shimmer still harbored such rage and magic inside of her. Personally speaking, I'm not much into rape type things, but this was well-deserved. It seemed vaguely unfair that only Adagio was on the receiving end of any punishment, while Aria and Sonata practically got rewarded.
I feel misled by the sirens' comment about the videos - esp after "The allure of having the Sirens at her will gave a power stronger than any friendship inside of Sunset." I expected Sunset to do what she needed to do, but with the intention of saving her friends - yet this almost sounds like she's giving up on friendship for the immense power she clearly has.
I found humor in the 'don't hurt her' 'you'll regret it' bit, 'cause what's Aria gonna do? Punch her?
For a moment, I was confused by "Sunset blinked as she saw a shimmering layer of scales crawling up her legs." as I couldn't decide whether she saw the scale on Adagio or herself (given the later comment that Sunset herself should become a siren).
I like this a lot, it could use some polishing up, but it's a very solid and enjoyable piece. ^__^

YuriGirl1224

YuriGirl1224 #5 · Jun 30th, 2015 · · ·

Hmmm very enjoy. . You should write another

Omnishifter

Omnishifter #6 · Jul 23rd, 2015 · 3 · ·

Sooo glad I found this, I've been hoping for something like this, I love the Dazzlings, and I due admit to finding Demon Sunset oddly sexy, especially in the scene where she first transforms, and then laughs, something about how she looks in that moment...

For once, I didn't enjoy the futa, but otherwise it was good, especially how the sirens swimming seemed to call back to there original existence, and I loved the implication of Sunset going evil again...(thoughtfully) Demon Sunset with demonically empowered Dazzlings at her side...well we're screwed.

Bryan Luna

Bryan Luna #7 · Dec 4th, 2015 · 9 · ·

When I first saw this I thought the Dazzlings were gonna gang bang Sunset, and I would have been fine with that. The way it turned out was really nice too.