One day, you will all come to my funeral just to make sure that I stay dead, but today is not that day | https://ko-fi.com/chillybook
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This. I love this.
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Ever been to a strip club? They do that for real.
Story's off to an interesting start. Will be following this one.
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I'll be sure to include more cleavage diving in future chapters
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"Interesting start" is about the best I could hope for at this point.
Okay, this was pretty captivating. Not super exciting for me, but you made it very damn clear that Aria was excited, and at the end of the day, it's conveying what the characters are experiencing that's important. If this is where your muse has led you, I approve.
She left her phone in the bathroom didn't she?
I hope you write more of this. Adagio/Aria is criminally underused for a Best Thing Ever.
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Nah, though that would be interesting if I was going that direction
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I will, eventually
This was a fun read, I'm really looking forward to more.
not gonna lie, I kept hearing Moxies voice come out of Adagio every time she said Sugar...and i am 110% in for that lol
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Who's Moxie?
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZBhF9PZqOcQ this is the voice I was hearing from Adagio. I'm 99.9% percent positive Adagio wasn't written with this character in mind but that is the voice i hear lol
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Mad Moxxi is always on my mind, and was very much so the inspiration behind Adagio's use of the pet name "sugar"
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I'll try not to keep you waiting too long
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well you can bump me up to 125% in now XD. seriously though this was really well written and I hope to see how this all plays out
So, Halestorm fan, eh? Glad to know there's another entity here with impeccable taste in music. After tonight's events, I think Aria's going to be listening to Do Not Disturb for a while.
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The idea is for every chapter to be named after a Halestorm song, with the chapter containing either the song title or a line from the song somewhere in its contents.
This doesn't actually do a whole lot for the story, outside of giving it a fun little theme. I just happen to really like Halestorm.
Throws soiled boxers in the bin. Well damn!!!
I really like how subtly scary Adagio is, and Sonata is the perfect companion for the struggling Aria. I'm definitely interested in seeing where this ends up going.
Damn it Sonata!
On a more serious note, I love how you've actually remembered that Adagio is an apex predator when writing her. Unlike others, she is genuinely cunning and observant.
And that makes her all the more dangerous and enticing.
Whew, it's too hot in my apartment for being October.
Y'know, Ari, some predators like to play with their food. And Dagi is an apex predator. Like an orca.
So far, so great.
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I really like the allusions to Adagio as dangerous or a predator
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Well, you are writing her that way, so yeah.
I really like it though. It fits her very well Chill.
Hily crap, do I love this fic. It's so damn cute! I'm glad to see it not end after 1 chapter like so many. Glad to see you make more as well, keep being awesome!
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I've found that, often times, people don't care about the way I write a character, because they already made up their minds
She didn't text Sonata during the date. I was expecting Sonata to be a bit miffed with her.
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Aria shot Sonata a quick text off-screen, when she and Adagio left the restaurant
the rest of the story !! introduce sunset in this story
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Eventually
when are you going to release the rest of your story it's so good
the best couple is SunDagio And Sonata x aria could you make a story about these two couples?
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The next chapter of this story is almost done. Just 2k or so more words before it's ready to go live.
As for your preferred ships, I don't really have any SunDagio stuff just yet, but I kinda made my name off of AriNata. Check it out.
- Equestria Girls
- Romance
- Slice of Life
- Anthology
A long collection of AriNata "shorts".Thanks for reading
this story I saw it and I find it horrible not to couple adagio with sunset but your story is really personal AriaNata is my second favorite couple
I think you meant to refer to Adagio instead of Aria.
I wonder just how much vigilance Adagio has on Aria.
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I'm really bad about mixing up names with the same sound at the start
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Yeah it can be tough, luckily it's only that one I noticed.
Great chapter, eagerly awaiting the next.
Ooh, that was good!
So, when does this go from semi-porn to full-on psychological horror/thriller? :b
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Never. Expect some romantic drama though.
If you're looking for something horrific, I think you have the wrong guy
So, Lizzie eh? Her last name wouldn't happen to be Hale, would it?
Dagi's got Ari wrapped round her finger (or other spot), doesn't she?
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You're right on the money with both of those
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I was literally just about to say that. Adagio does indeed have Aria under her spell.
I'm super excited for the next chapter
I am looking forward to
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Shouldn't be too long.
This was some GOOD emotional interaction and drama.
Caring about the plot makes me care about the porn, and you have been quite good at making me care about this plot.
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That's good to hear, cause the porn is coming soon
The fic is still going strong, do we get to read any of those embarrassing stories?