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Jackelope
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First baby!
So this has happened to Sunset multiple times and she's just rolling with it.
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Yep.
Ohh. See all throughout the story, i couldn't focus because i wanted to know if it was a good ending or not. The fact that it definitely is repeating days AND sunset willingly goes to them to get fucked, makes it...kinda good.
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I'd say more than "just rolling with it". She quite clearly goes there knowing perfectly well what's going to happen. In a way it's still rape, she's beguiling the sirens into sex "against" their will, for they wouldn't do it if they knew she wants it. Somewhat dark in that regard.
She should try to stay awake for churros though, what a waste.
10276434 Not normally my thing, but was up for villains being villainous today. Would have been good if the "Sunset is into it" bit was more integrated into the storyline. Some foreshadowing makes the last few paragraphs far less tacked on and more confirming suspicions.
Lines like "She paid special attention to her clit, hoping a quick arrival to orgasm would bring a quicker show of mercy from her captors." are, with the ending as it is, out of character for her. She's implying here that she wants it over quickly and not without much fight, but at the end she seems to imply she likes it rough.
My thought was that at the end they would brainwash her, using her anger from the rape to put a little suggestion in her head to keep coming back to their van and telling them.
Still, story was what it said on the wrapper, and apart from the section mentioned above (and a few little grammar issues) was readable and enjoyable. Bravo.
*saves story for later*
OMG!! IT IS NOT THE FACT THAT SHE IS GETING RAPED. BUT THE FACT THAT SHE KNEW IT ALL ALONG AND LOVES IT! Omg! Like amazing fanfict! Like that ending was worth it! Loved it!
Which also makes it consential in some way. Nice!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Pretty rad. So there are multiples versions of that day where the Dazzlings rape Sunset. I really enjoyed Sonata's deep little pondering at the end there.
Well that was pretty good! You can basically make of it what you wish. if you prefer the rape-aspect, Sunset's got some subtle brainwashing going on, if you don't, she was in on it from the start. 10/10!