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JamesBurton


Dare to be Different

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This is gonna be interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Dat Dan cameo; and "The General" is obviously a spoof of The Kernel

Also, Aria you heartless SOB, how could you push poor Sonata in front of a moving car and have her get hit just to get $5?

Pleeeeease let this continue, I'm interested in SO many stories that are "incomplete" that haven't had a new chapter release in months... I hope this isn't another one.

What a bad luck for the Dazzlings :applejackunsure: :fluttershysad:
I hope everything will improve, and get along with sunset :twilightsmile:

I was surprised to see Dinky was the villain :pinkiegasp:
I'm dying to know what happens :rainbowkiss:
I hope to see the next chapter soon :raritystarry:

A little bit of criticism I have for this story and the chapters after is to have more descriptions of things. Like how do they look in the bikinis, maybe they do some sexy moves to get more money, or something like that. Also this is going great towards the inevitable and I hope that it is quite hot.

I can honestly see Adagio being a Stripper. But if you need any help maybe take a look at my Dazzling Fanfic

good chapter :twilightsmile:
but I did not like the final scene :ajsleepy:

Hmm, never knew cannibalism can be this funny.

Why do I get the feeling that those scenarios with Sergeant Sprinkles were base from a movie or something?

Also, another great chapter. I was nearly thinking that you where going to let this story die after a long while with no updates.

Will the Dazzlings survive another week in canterlot city can Sunset become friends with the former Sirens will Fluttershy reevaluate her love for rabbits all will be answered next time on "the real Dazzling of canterlot city"

$400?
I'd love to find an apartment with that kind of rent

Too fucking funny, So how are the Dazzlings going to get out of this mess? Maybe they should all get a job at hooters:heart: they got the tits,hips and body for it.

What happened? Well, lets just say that it involved and horse, a golden retriever and a bucket of fried chicken. My ass is still sore from what happened.

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Also, I sense a deeper plot to the story with Rumble starting to uproot.

So we're supposed to laugh off the fact that Derpy and Dinky are fucking whores who deserve to be skinned alive?

whatever.

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