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Mochas Dungeon
My darker (fun) side resides here.
Mochas Dungeon
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well this took a turn. can't wait to see what happens next.
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life and love are full of challenges, their world should have problems behind the scenes just like ours does.
I imagine we see the icing while our imaginations make up the cake and fillings.
6037174 wow, that was one of the most view changing replies i have ever gotten. i salute you.
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I made it up, thanks!
6038196 that was a great saying.You should copyright it
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So what do you think of the story so far?
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problematic?
Care to elaborate?
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6070007 do you have a proof-reader?
6070016
Lol.
my wife who had no experience.
I've asked dozens of times but no one answers yet.
:/
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still confused kind of but thanks!
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I appreciate it.
Don't get me wrong.
I was expecting criticism is all.
Thanks bruh.
Our Chica.
Personally my largest concern is that I have a bad balance between show and tell and keeping their personalities in line
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love it.
6070016
interested?
In proof reading?
6070231 sure
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that's all you have to say after 6000 words?
That's it. I'm gonna make my own Equestria. With black jack.
and hookers.
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hoof me.
Great response, that kind of comment makes my day.
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well, we'll have to see what happens together!
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I'm certain soarin will have learned his lesson and all well be fine.
Maybe he'll become the seventh element bearer!
Maybe not
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I'm politically correct.
Hoof bump.
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next chapter! !!!!!
hmmm, i'm interested to see where the whole accent thing goes. maybe she winds up having a brain issue that makes her think that the way she speaks is the norm?
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Wow. ..what an interesting view.
Think it's psychological association or something like that. Psychology was never my strong suit. But as a guess her mind is subconsciously changing her to be closer to Applejack's ways so she will fit in more.
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you win a cupcake!
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peace doesn't mean the war is over on all fronts. ..
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Soarin isn't out of trouble just cuz Rainbow said they're cool. C'mon, this ins't some cheesy romance. It's the background of their world which is a lot less icing and a lot more ingredients.
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Well ya see when two mares who REALLY love each other. ..
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Omg me to.
Here's the link, it's the first clop I read.
Here it is
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Be afraid.
Be very afraid
Ah what the Hay man!
I was all caught up...
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D'awwww, looks like you'll have to keep reading!
Oh my emotions
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The feels. ..
I'm sorry.
plot and all
Yey! Blu!
Awwwwwwwwwwww
Wait how would Rainbowdash and applejack have a foal?
How dose that work...
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Thanks, I didn't expect so much awe.
I just wanted a simple moment.
No drama, no anything. Only each other.
The true RD that lives behind the scenes with AJ.
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Oh that's what you were goin for ok I be it now.
So rainbowdash as a stallion can't wait for that chapter.
Mocha, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME! WHAT HAVE I BECOME AH THE CLOP FIC MAKE IT STOP CAN'T STOP READING IT!
WHY!!!!
*slams his still broken muzzle on the table agin, this time breaking the table and shattering what was left of his muzzle*
Also want awwww I'll give you awwwww
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Um... in my opinion I think the subplots could be a little shorter
The hole thing about Scootaloo diapionted me I was hopeing for some kind of sacrafice from AJ or rainbow to carry a foal . Never mind still a very cute chapter
Great chapter
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It's not even close to official yet. :)
Don't fret, things will happen! !!
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Good because you still have to explain how that would work, and don't say next chapter.
You said that last chapter.