I'm a brony, I write and I drive cars. Naturally my domain is Equestria Girls, where I can write about racing in the streets. Avi by: http://0megalucario.tumblr.com/
The Dazzlings have been defeated in the battle of the bands. Without their magic, they're working out how to get by in this foreign land and figuring out their next move. When a new kid with a need for speed transfers to CHS from out of town, the Dazzlings take notice and attempt to take advantage of his ignorance. By cozying up to the new boy, Honest Applejack risks ruining the Dazzlings' plans.
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Very very nice. I hope this isn't the end. More please
5959668 I promise I've got more up my sleeve
I'll be happy to start working faster if just one reader is interested 
5959735 Yay! I'll be watching
Racing? In Equestria Girls?
I like it!
5960191 I guess I'll stop answering comments and get back to work
OC x Applejack?
You don't see that everyday. Good story
5960640 I'm glad you like it
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
NEW CHAPTER YAAAAY!
Man, this dude has some choices to make. Too bad he doesn't know that Applejack's connected to the bearer of honesty 
An interesting start. A few things respectfully
Tabula Rosa, know what it means just seems random in its usage, kinda out of place.
Also---"MY dad must be fast asleep by 1 AM.
Do you mean: "My dad must've been asleep by 1am."
So does this guy have a name? Does his Dad?
Lastly "Wonderbolts" should be capitalized.
Sorry for Grammar Nazing use what you want or don't, will keep reading.
5969535 Thanks for the feedback. I didn't see some of those nits before. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story despite anything else I might have missed
Keeping the name secret? Hmmmm.
I don't know car lingo, but is "speedo" a widely accepted abbreviation for speedometer?
5969791 It is, the main character's dialog is based on slang and speech patterns of other drivers I hang around.
So now we have ourselves a love triangle. Turns out that Adagio is more than she reveals!
I just hope Applejack doesn't find this out the hard way 
What can I say? I'm a sucker for F&F styled stories. Since chapter 1, this story had drawn me in. Keep up the good work and that speedometer too if you feel like it.
6011277 Thanks for the favorite! I'm glad my writing has been so effective
Your words mean a lot to me and I'll keep doing my best to make this a great story! 
This is a great story my friend.
Have an upvote and a fave!
6013240 Thanks
As one of the writers I look up to, that means a lot to me 
6013430 Anytime my friend. It's always good to see people writing stories with topics that they are passionate about. I can't wait to see what'll happen in the next chapter.
No.....No...NO!!! ADAGIO!!!
Poor Applejack!!! 
6018735 I do always enjoy your comments!
6018878 Hee, thanks. It's hard not to get emotially involeved with these characters
And I was actually fooled by Adagio 
DUDE.
I'm guessing I'm speaking for everypony when I ask this: What is the name of the main character in the story?
6030763 Why yes, you do speak for everypony, that is an interesting question indeed
No, no, wait, who did he choose? Come back!
Oh, and also, I lost it at Sunny Smiley Face. 
That's a new one 
6033512 I'm curious, who would you have our little hero here end up with?
6033826 Applejack, of course!
6033826 Applejack
6033826 DUH THE HOT AJ. SHE'S WORTH EVERYTHING.
6033826 Applejack, on account that she's not a manipulative bitch
AJ kept him out of trouble and it looks like because of their pasts, they belong to each other. It was seriously wrong for Adagio to break that good thing to pieces. He should choose to go with AJ; they deserve each other.
Nothing like a good ol' cliffhanger to keep us in suspense. Excellent chapter my friend!
GRRR, Adagio, you man stealer! HANDS OFF!
Applejack's going to need her circle of friends and a ton of ice cream...but she seems to be handling it rather well....on the outside at least 
6064115 You know what they say about Applejack and crying
6064277 Gosh darn it, right in the feels! Why, writer, why must you torture me?!?
6064340 I sustain myself on a weekly dose of my reader's anguish
Well, this escalated quickly, for the umpteenth time. I can't complain though; my writing skill is still shit.
Hmm... this is an interesting chapter, my friend. I wonder though, is there going to be an alternate version of this where he chooses Applejack?
6069700 This ain't the end my friend. Anything can still happen
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........DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGG!!!!
They kissed
Waaaaah!!!! Also, Adagio standing through the sunroof, was that a Perks of a Wallflower reference? 
6140775 I've never seen that movie
it's just something that came to me and it was kinda fun to write 
6140829 Very nice! Keep up the fantastic work!
6140859 Thank you very much
hopefully I can pick up a good pace for writing again
Honestly, I want to slap them both so hard for all the pain they caused AJ
6141492 I don't blame you
6141650 I agree. Can't wait for more
Wow... Just wow. This was certainly not the twist or ending that I was expecting from this story. I had always hoped for him and Adagio to hook up in the end, but i am satisfied with this as well. This might be a bit too much to ask for, but could you maybe make an epilogue chapter? With Applejack, Adagio and his father at his funeral?
6236872 I hadn't planned on it, but thats a pretty good idea
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and especially the ending 
Not every story has a happy ending.
But your ending was GOOD!
Poor dad, but at least his son is now with his mother.
6237455 I'm so glad you liked the ending
Thanks for reading Street Dreams 