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Tank Drill


Retired Brony, if you come across this account, I welcome you. My stories are dated, but show my writing progress. Have fun with that.

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Meet Zephyr, High school student in his Freshman year moves and transfers from Appleloosa high school to Canterlot High school. The reason? His parents had to transfer him to live at his own apartment because they're working everyday, only to have the weekend off. Feeling relieved that he moved away from his problems, he immediately meets up with Pinkie and the others making him feel more accepted. Though something is eating him up when he meets up with Sunset Shimmer.


(This is set in Equestria Girls and Rainbow Rocks. So all of them are human.)

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 19 )

i can't wait to see their reactions when sunset and Zephyr formally meet each other and realize they live in the same building

2 Chapters Left! :pinkiegasp: I thought this would last longer than that :applejackunsure:

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Don't worry they're going to be longer than expected.

Dr. OcSid

~Reverse~

:facehoof: How Come I Didn't Notice Eailier

Now that i think about it....

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What did you think about the story? Especially the plot twist?

6118951 It was neat, got a little raunchy but still good

I just bearly figured out that discord thing

Dude I never realized that Dr ocsid was discord spelled backwards. Pure genius.

7091773 you damn right, and don't ever forget it.

Pinkie Pie in a brown coat killed it.:rainbowlaugh:

Did you happen to know that the mlp show actually created a character named Zephyr for the show. He even makes a few appearances in Equestria girls.

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This was way before Fluttershy's brother (Zephyr) was introduced into the show and Equestria Girls. So let's just say that this Zephyr isn't Fluttershy's brother.

Todos nos reunimos alrededor de la alfombra y nos preparamos para otra ronda del horrible juego. Aunque una cosa aún permanecía en mi mente, ¿quién era esta misteriosa estudiante transferida y por qué Pinkie tuvo que esperar para decírmelo, pero no sus amigos?

Eso se llama el poder del guion.

Me encogí de hombros, "No había nadie dentro del restaurante y era lo mismo". Mentí.

¿Había necesidad?

Rarity se burla de su demostración de comer mientras yo le daba un mordisco a la pizza de verduras. El sabor es delicioso, pero algo más llenó mi cabeza... Ese chico que me miraba fijamente en la pizzería; No lo había visto antes en esta ciudad y él... Se veía guapo. Tenía anteojos, un poco más cortos que yo, cabello castaño con reflejos castaños claros, musculatura levemente tonificada, camisa roja y jeans azules. Mi corazón estaba en éxtasis cuando mi mente estaba pensando en él. Sentí que mi cara se calentaba y todos estaban en silencio.

¿Y cómo sería eso raro? No importa que tanto tiempo vivas en una ciudad, no podrías conocer a todas las personas, prácticamente cada persona que te encuentre por la calle será un total desconocido y lo estarías viendo por primera vez, a eso tienes que agregar a las personas que hacen turismo o solo están de pasada.

"Su nombre es Zephyr, creo". Ella respondió a lo que los ojos de Rainbow y Fluttershy se agrandaron.

¿Por qué Rainbow Dash reacciono así? En la historia en ningún momento Zephyr se lo menciono a ella, así que es imposible que ella pueda saberlo.

Why did Rainbow Dash react like this? At no point in the story did Zephyr mention it to her, so it's impossible for her to know.

Translated by Google.
(Los precios de los artículos me parecen ridículamente baratos)

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