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10/10, would clop again.
Very sexy.
Did not expect this to be done so quickly. Just a couple days ago I saw half the word count and them BAM.
Glad it finally dropped though.
all that prench to parse
but so worth it
This was very well done
Well, clop is not my cup of tea. I actually skipped the majority of the sexual parts (i did read the stuff leading up to and a bit of the foreplay) reading the first five or so lines of each paragraph to see where it would end. But this was well written and while i wouldn't read this again i don't question the quality.
9/10 quality check
Hey, not bad. I'm not much for adult stuff, but this was pretty well written, and that ending was right on point. Well done!
Some of the Prench escaped me (Fleur's lines at the end of their tribbing) but I caught most of it. Bonus points to you for actually making me try to remember a language I haven't tried to learn for eighteen years. Have an upvote and a fave.
I see several nice similarities between this story and my own, yet unfinished one, Weekend in Pearis. I think it may just be some common things for RarityxFleur fics. They're are a... rarity, after all.
Overall, however. This fic is 100% Fleur de Lis approved.
For all your ranting, I would say that this was a rather enjoyable read.
While not your best piece of fiction, it was still nicely written, and I haven't noticed any glaring errors. Well, besides the typical smut cliches of everyone being suddenly willing
Really good story! I just wish I knew French.
Hate having to translate everything at the end. Might I suggest for future putting author notes at the end with all the French translation
And then Fancy joins in and gets Fleur and Rarity pregnant.
I enjoyed the story and don't change a thing, translating it was half the fun.