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Chaotic_Renegade

Chaotic_Renegade #1 · May 21st, 2015 · 1 · ·

I'm assuming your talking about there dick size, do you think the sizes should be bigger or smaller? Cause last time I checked, horses, and yes ponies, have pretty damn big dicks. In my mind, or at least in this story, there body sizes are the size of earth equines.

brony11723

brony11723 #2 · May 21st, 2015 · · ·

Yer I was surprised there wasn't more cmc x trouble shoes it's like incest clops there jest isn't enough I want more applemac jackbloom bloommac raribelle twining twivet scootdash (I clarify it as incest because there practically sisters) buttonxbuttonsmum etc.

Lanxide

Lanxide #3 · May 21st, 2015 · · ·

Good read and I like where this is going.

I would recommend getting an editor to help you with this.
Also make sure to add warning saying this story contains underage sex scenes and such.

Xaldon Ajide

Xaldon Ajide #4 · Jun 7th, 2015 · · ·

6001451 For your very first clop fic, this was pretty good. Can't really fault anything, keep going, I hope applebloom gets caught and it turns into a foursome with the CMC having fun with brae's cock.