• Member Since 19th Nov, 2011
  • offline last seen Jan 22nd, 2016

DanMcIntosh


Just a normal Texan brony here. I play guitar, bass, go to college classes for a degree in music, and read fanfiction with friends on skype/teamspeak.

Comments ( 81 )

well...i kind of expexted that from...trollestia...:trollestia:

Translation: Girl, go out and get some!

170696
I don't know seemed more like Molestia training her student

so....my enemy has tried to corrupt best pony?
-draws plasma swords and lightsabers and dons my magic-proof armor-
it is a fight to the death -appears behind MOLESTIA :trollestia: and murders her-
I WIIIIIIN:pinkiehappy:

You use plasma swords and lightsabers on a Goddess who raises the sun? Nah, that won't get you anywhere. Go First Age Equipment. For when you have to kill something ancient and powerful, use First Age Equipment.

For the actual story.... Interesting. This is going to be one of the more... Interesting experiences in Twilight's life. Particularly if her friends decide to do a surprise visit, which is just like them.
:twilightblush:

i wasn't expecting that pairing.

now we need straight clop in this story. :twilightsheepish:

171074
Its going to be a balance of Female x Female and Female x Male scenes

Fixed some minor spelling errors in this chapter.

*looks at pic*
DAT ASS :rainbowkiss:

Keep it up.:twilightsmile:

...this ain't gonna end well. And this is coming from a gut feeling that once called a perfect game three weeks before it happened.

205412 Just you turning one of my favorite characters into a slut. That's all. :ajbemused:

205755
Its just a cartoon pony. Stop being so mad, bro.

Also, this is clopfiction, of course characters are gonna act like sluts.

206198 Just go easy on her, okay? The last thing we need is another Romance Reports. :pinkiesick:

206208
I thought this was another romance reports :trollestia:

My reaction... --->:ajsmug::heart:

Romance Reports was a erotic fanfic, this is a clopfic.


I dont mind either but just saying :trollestia:

How's Twilight going to explain this?

would be a better written story if you replaced the word "pussy" with something else.
Also while you did a good job not going overboard with the sex scene it would be nice if you would write more about what is going on in Twilight's head. describe more of what she is thinking and feeling on an intellectual and emotional level.

other than that it was an "ok" story. not great not bad just ok.

215652
Thanks. It is one of my first attempt at a full-fledged story, even if it is just clop-fiction.

I was so happy when I found this pairing! :heart:

Man, when are you going to update this story again?

I'm pretty much sold on this story. It's awesome!

Gotta say though, I'm a little worried for Twilight. When you do that kind of 'work', you're bound to get some of the 'undesirables', who think that Twilight is easy and think that she's just an object for sick personal gain.I hope nothing bad happens to her.

lololololol:rainbowlaugh:olololol:rainbowlaugh:
ooooo this is going to be soooooooooooooooooo funny:rainbowlaugh:

Sorry but it was kinda annoying with the constant "said the blue Pegasus " but other than that annoyance I did like the story

206208 but I liked romance reports...:fluttercry:

Oh Buck.... 'Dat ending... LOL!:twilightblush:

You know, putting on an outfit means sex time but nude dose not.

It's a costume party, you know?

315120
And then there are those weirdo ponies that don't put any clothes on for their sexual deviance.

Oh shit!!!

I tell you guys, this fic... not sure if love or hate, but colour me intrigued I'll still be keeping my track on this!

well written i LOVE how sex scenes where written.. well done i should say the 4th chapter was the best of this story so far... i hope it gets better aas this story goes on keep it up!!!:scootangel:

WHAT...THE...FUCK....:facehoof:warnings, why do I never belive them

lololololollololololololololol *heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeave* ahahahahahahahahahahahahahah o god i can't breath ahahahahahahahahahahah :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::derpyderp1::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I really have to congratulate you. Most clopfics are just that-a chapter or two,barely worth rating. But not only do you go into great -and often odd- detail,you also managed to put plot in here that isn't just that kind of plot. Well, jeez, I'm bad at complimenting. Let's just say this is the..
BEST.
POSSIBLE.
THING!!!
:raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry:

Ummmm, well I'm at a loss for words on this one:twilightsheepish:

The plot thickens *slaps self*

the plot thickens

397340
I don't think I'm that good, but thanks anyway.

I'm writing what I'm feeling into words: BURN IN HELL JET SET!:flutterrage:

*sigh* felt good to get that out. To make this short, great chapter, story is getting good, I can't wait to see how much Jet Set will get the hell beat out of him when everything is over.

After all, he's going to try to blackmail Princess Celestia's personal student. Celestia will NOT be happy if(when) she finds out. And I'm sure Celestia won't try to deny that she gave this assignment to Twilight. She wouldn't stoop to that level just to save herself.

:moustache: very well done sir, well done indeed

I wouldn't do that if I were you, mate.
The princessess, for one, but mainly the fact that Twilight can have quite the Liara :pinkiecrazy: moments:
'I WILL FLAY YOU. WITH MY MIND.'

Login or register to comment