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Penn Hooven


Writer and fanfiction reviewer. Feel free to say hi.

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This was on my DA account, and I thought you all might enjoy it.

Pirate Dash has a tumblr account. This story was given permission to be written and is approved by Pirate Dash and company.

Hope you enjoy.

(If this gains enough popularity, I will see if Pirate Dash will let me write more stories)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

It's cute but lacks a little bit of cohesion. Not much happened but the characters were pretty, well, in character. The interactions are fine but it needs a better story. Keep up the good work. Have a like!

5900395 Thank you, and I see your point. I'll start thinking of a better plot, and all.

6441616 yeah, this was a much older fic, one that I didn't proof read. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

It was nice. Cool ending. Wasn't too heavy handed, or, well, hoofed, Whatever... It was a nice read, still.

I can't believe I haven't commented yet. My bad!

This is my favorite fic of her so far. I love the twist at the end too, it was a great read throughout :3

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