After a long, and particularly difficult day, you finally settle down for a quiet evening, when you discover a letter on your night stand, from Luna.
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WOW! That's a twist, good story.
6446872 Thank you.
Loved that last page.
Definitely worth a like and fave.
You know, for a darksad story, I sure laughed my way all the way through this.
Awesome. Excellent ending.
6558693 thank you. Glad you like it.
6505165 In a good way or bad way?
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Huh, that's been a while, let me think... The first half was honestly just kind of funny. Serenading toilets and all, my sense of humour is childish like that at times. Problem is, it also kind of ruined the mood for what followed afterwards. I had trouble reading it as tragic rather than cheesy. Then, around "STITCHES!", I just cracked back up. All in all I didn't think it was bad, but the amount of tension between the two moods just makes it not quite work as either, if you ask me.
6559125 okay. This was a bit of an experiment. The fact that you thought that it was funny, is actually hilarious to me.
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I suppose either half by itself would have worked better for me, but together, it just seemed overwrought in a way that was hard to take seriously. If nothing else, it does seem like you've got a knack for the first half's kind of silly comedy, though. Might be worth trying a larger story that's more focused on that kind of thing.
6560966 Like All Hail the Muffin Princess. Right. Thanks
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I'll be giving that one a read and get back to you about it. I like the looks of it already, though.
Saw this name, and description and thought, 'Oh look, a touching Luna and Celestia story. Then came the actual story. I find this story to have a surprising...chance of probability to it. Thinking about it, it always looks like Celestia is in control of the show. Everything goes her way.
So all in all, I think this is a good idea that deserves more attention.
6573437 Thank you.
I thought this would be sad and painful and something bad might happen to Luna and it would be tragedy all around.
I did not expect a horror story.
Good job.
6577242 Thankie.
What did you mean by stitches? Is Twilight a doll or something.
6688112 everything is in the story. If you didn't get it, then go back and reread it. You'll catch it.
What. Just. Happened.
That was unexpected. But I liked it.
6823972 Why thank you.
Wow, just wow. This story was really good in my opinion and that twist was amazing.
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Thank you kindly. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Great story!!
6923131 many thanks, my friend.
What does Luna mean by stitches!
6964275 Think what Celestia sees when she wakes up from the dream to the end of the story. If you still don't get it, pm me, and I'll tell you, if you really want to know.
So. Why didn't Luna try the elements?
Or, is Celestia still dreaming...
7252666 I don't exactly want to spell everything out in the story, as much of it is for the reader to decide what is reality or dream in it, but suffice it to say that if the Elements drove her mad, and have a will of their own, and Luna knows this, it makes sense that she wouldn't try to force them to undo something they done.
6924145 My master luna is blunt in her words and yes there just dolls.
6868575 You get the golden bronie award for best plot twist.
7403459 orig02.deviantart.net/ce59/f/2011/319/0/6/fluttershy_squee_by_officer_rabbit-d4exinj.png
7403523 Yes... Yes... You are the first of many that shall be awarded. Be happy.
7403548 holds breath in anticipation orig05.deviantart.net/ed12/f/2013/118/a/b/fluttershy_squee_by_mcwhale4-d637yil.jpg
7403548 That and loving my omnipresent dimensional ability.
Holy shit.
That is legit creepy.
Okay then did not see that coming.... good job. I might would want to try doing a reading of this. Would you mind?
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Go right ahead. I don’t mind. Just send me a link to it when you’re done.
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Excellent!!! And I already have an idea for the art to go with. *flees to find sketchbook*
She did it! :D
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I'm confused. What does this have to do with my story?
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I’m so sorry! Wrong link ^^’ miss courtesy rose made a reading of your video :) will try to link it lter if I can
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Oh, I know that. She actually asked me a looooong time ago if she could do that. I'm flattered that she did.
Woah… My mind was metaphorically blown from the twist at the end! Is Celestia still in the Castle of the Two Sisters this whole time? Is Canterlot just a fictional place her mind created?
Is she even a pony?!
I have to say, Author, cool story! Though, I am confused by the ending.
Gaslighting be like…
Blessings!
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