I'm here to write my way into your hearts and infect your minds.
Hundreds of years have passed and Twilight is all that remains of every pony she knows except the other Alicorn Princesses as she reflects.
The first chapter was posted in my novice writing so it's not as good. Chapter two; much gooder.
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This story is fairly decent. I'll be watching it. There are a few noticeable grammar errors, and some places where you need to reread the passage. Despite these flaws, the story is interesting. If you don't have an editor, I'd highly suggest getting one. If you do, make sure they take their time with it. I hope I could be of assistance. Good luck!
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How would I go about getting an editor?
I need one.
:)
Thx for the comment, I'll reread it soon and hopefully fix the grammar.
5857781 You can get an editor by going to a group such as Looking For Editors and asking in the forums. I'm also an editor and would be willing to help, but I won't be available until tomorrow or possibly Tuesday.
i had a story in the works for a while now just like this except more than 1000 years later i was just about to type it up when gladly i found that someone else got to the same idea first and was wondering if i could still write mine
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Of course! Let me know when it's done! Mine is only like, 200 years or something and it's on hiatus while I work on a dramatic romance. Writing is all about creating a story from your heart. No one can stop that! Rock those letters into words! :)
thanks man I was bummed when I found out but thanks I feel so much better now i even started on another story while I waited I just could not rest till I found out, I even mentioned you in the the long description I'm gonna keep that in, but thanks you put my mind at ease, and good luck on that romance whats it called so when its available i'd love to read it.
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It's already pretty far...
Zap apples: the forbidden fruit.
Justclick my name at the top.
It's Going places...
I've read that one it was pretty good my favourite part was when aj lifts her knee and Rd jumps
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I done recall that part.
My imagination runs wild often.
I can't even look it up cuz I'm at work.
Lol
Oh.
Ohohoh I remember now.
That was first chapter.
Lol
Derp
I'm up to chapter 14 now I think and maybe 1/4 way done...
I got it a few weeks ago have you updated it yet
5912482 every other day a new chapter...
They'regoing trough a rough patch right now.
Check it out!
Little random question who is your favorite character mine is scootz
Just a random question also what's your favorite 3 ships mine are twipie, flutterdash, and rarijack I ask this question to everybody just like to see where people's heads are at
5912590 my fav depends On how I feel, honestly.
I can say twilight, rarity, spike and Celestia are at the bottom of my list.
And my fav ship is dash and applejack.
I just can't imagine a better relationship in the group except a possible Fluttershy dash I may write but I can't get my mind around a sensible relationship involving twilight.
Pinkie isnt even a possibility at this point, yet.
I may work it out soon though
Cool like I said I love hearing where people's heads are at
I'm also not used to this sad story stuff in my own time I'm more of a comedy writer but I had this story in my head ever since I saw twilight as an alicorn when I first started watching mlp fim I actually came in between s4 & s5 and started watching on daily motion
In short some pointers would be helpful the story is about her daily struggles in the last 5 days of her life before she ends it all and I'd love to get some help any help at all if you'd like when I get out of school I'll try to start on it
Also what do you do for work just wondering
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I'm a chef
A chef that's cool where do you work. When I get out of this prison the nicknamed Lakewood High I'll be a computer tech or a network admin like my dad was
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Right now Ruby Tuesday but I'm gonna go back to a real restaurant eventually
Well I'll leave you to it reply once you get off
Why did this ever stop it still makes me tier up.
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I couldn't focus on a way to make the others pass on without making this the most tragic thing I could write, and my heart couldn't take it...
Now I'm one of those people that can find the comedy in a funeral, but this
was just saddness i almost cried like i did after reading Fly Away Sweet Scootaloo. or watching My Little Dashie, both of which i found some comedy in but this was just right to the happy family goes to see best friend and family member dies, albeit epicaly, yet terribly, and that was just the first chapter
...
It was so amazing and very sad.
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Oh my.
Just read it myself.