I'm a professional editor and story critic, here to help bronies free of charge! It's like if a lesser-quality Stephen King helped you write a story! I also have written a few fictions here and there.
Not only is it comedy, but this is the kind of comedy that anyone can easily enjoy. This is The Alicorn Curse.
For those of you who don't know, my scoring rubric goes like this:
Plot: 30
Characters:20
Grammar/Spelling: 20
Structure: 20
Detail: 10
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1786180 Not a problem! Thanks to you as well!
Hey thanks so much for the follow!
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1768659 I'm done. All you need to do now is click the Upload from Google Docs button on your chapters and put in the edited version.
The prequel is here: Prequel
Chapter 1 is here: Chapter 1
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My pleasure!