Princess Luna takes Pumpkin Cake and Pound Cake on a brief nighttime flight around Ponyville.
Note: Inspired by the animation "Children of the Night," and meant just as something short and sweet. Please be gentle! ^_^
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Very sweet. Part of me wondered right until the end, did Luna actually take the foals for a flight, or was it all a dream she gave them?
I like the idea of Luna acting as the sandman, giving sleep as well as good dreams to foals.
5812001 Thank you! I always thought that it was only a matter of time before Pumpkin Cake and Pound Cake would meet Princess Luna--because she travels through the dreams of fillies so often. ^_^
5811995 Actually, I kind of thought this was a real possibility for Luna. She helps fillies to resolve their nightmares and sleep well, after all. ;3 Thanks!
Aw, I really loved this
It was so sweet, and I don't think it seemed rushed at all! Just a little beautiful slice of life featuring Princess Luna 
5812197 That means a lot! The idea just occurred to me, and I'd always wanted to do something based on the great animation where Luna sings to the fillies at night. The context and outcome were different, but it seemed like something she would do. ;3
You wrote Pumpkin Pie four times instead Pumpkin Cake.
Pinkie Pie and Mr. Cake have some explaning to do!
Very beautiful and sweet and relaxing as well! Maybe some of Luna's magic is working on this tired old guy. This was a very good story. I really enjoyed your description of Luna and how she helps the foals. I also like the vagueness of whether Pumpkin and Pound are dreaming or actually with Luna on her nightly flight. Very, very nice! I enjoyed it!
Wish I could fly away with Luna now.....Thank you for a wonderful story.
5812214 I agree, I could see her doing something like this, especially since she seems to focus her dream-entering abilities on the younger ponies in Equestria :) And you're welcome for the favorite!
5812296 Oops!
Thank you for pointing out those mistakes (they should be fixed now)--and I'm sure Mr. Cake and Pinkie Pie would be happy for it as well. Hah. 
And thanks for the favorite! ;3
5815035 Luna is truly remarkable. Hopefully, we'll get to see more of her dream-walking in Season 5!
5812458 I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Luna must have a lot of sweet adventures with fillies late at night, so hearing this story captured some of that feels wonderful. I hope you slept well! ;3 And thank you for the favorite!
Awwh, cute
one thing:So the fillies wiggled out from underneath their blankets,
I think that should be foal's
5815541 Thanks (for your kind words and the correction)!
I've fixed that small error as well. ^_^
You are very welcome. I actually did sleep very well that night. Ever since I came into this fandom, I have had more restful nights than I ever did before. Some would say it is just coincidence......I say it is magic! The kind of magic that only those who truly love and care for others can wield. Much as those who can write a beautiful tale of such a place and the wondrous beings that reside there.
Thank you (and Luna) for a night of peaceful slumber.
5816226 I agree! This fan community is truly a magical one. Everyone is so friendly, encouraging, and uplifting. I love how it helps people to pursue their goals and get better at their passions, such as when talented writers help each other to stay confident and become stronger at this craft.
You're welcome, but Luna did most of the work (hah)--and I wish you many more restful nights.
I like this story!
Pretty sweet and sound, just like the rest Pound and Pumpkin Cake is going to have. 
5819308 Thanks, and indeed they are!
This story reminded me to go and watch the awesome animation and music of DuoCartoonist!!! in other words, I LOVE IT!!!! Keep up the great work!!! HAPPY EASTER TO YOU!
-Brightly Litt
5826909 Thank you so much for the praise, although I think DuoCartoonist deserves it most of all for making such a lovely animation. I'll keep working hard, and I hope your Easter celebration is the best!
5811995
I suspect she gave them a dream of them flying with Luna. I find it very unlikely that she abducted two foals from their beds without the permission of the parents. In either case, the fic was very cute .
6855174 Ah, thank you very much!
You wrote another great story!
7994349 Thanks for you kind words!