I feel that this is honestly a chapter just to make the readers have feels and it worked. I love the original ending, but the alternative seems to take a different approach and it became a somber but a victoriously strong ending.

In my own perspective, I think this seems to work better from the things that Am’Dhaegar said and what Jack believed instead of letting Jack live as a pony and have a second chance at life. This feels more fitting to me seeing as he sacrificed his life through the strength of Am'Dhaegar the Pure.

The whole story is perfect. Amazing job!

õͫ͆͐ͭ͑̿͢k͉̭̼̬̰̱̮̽,̗̣͈̺͑̒̊̑͊̋̿ͅ ̸̤͓͙͙͔̣i ̛̲͈͍̜̝ͥw͕͍̹̙̟͔ͫ̃́̌ͣ͘i̔͛̃͂l̡͙̞l̆ͥ̾͂҉͍͍̞̣̹ ̩̐̐ͯr̟̔͂͌ͭͩ̔ͧe̤̝̓̀̑͝ạ͚̪̰͎̳̫̅ͬ͋̀̐͐ͥ͞d̻̰͡ͅ ̲̼̲͎͔̟t̏ͦ̿ͥ̈͞h͑ͤ̈́̀͛i̸̱̰͚̟̿ͬ͂̆ͬs̮̺͑ͯ̈́̀ͬ̓ͤ ͚̯̒̈͂̚͢l̮̭͌̎̓͌͛ͭă̈́̾̂҉̖̬͉̰t̘͖̹̮̺̣͙ͦ̈́̓̎e̟̯͌ͧr̡̠͕̱̦͍̰̄!̧̤̪̖̮̝

I like this ending better

i...i like both..mostly cos one leads to a sequel and keeps him alive..

3565765 Right never mind...I was actually rushing through chapter parts for the action.

What can I say? I was hooked into the story. :) :3 javascript:smilie('');javascript:smilie('');

I see...

This...this is all I have to say...

Both endings work out rather nicely, the first one works out well if you intended to continue the story in a sequel of sorts, while this one would be a all-around pleasant ending that wraps things up rather nicely.

In the end it actually still ends up being your choice depending on what you want to do next.

4847934 Huh... guess I misquoted that. I believe I meant to say 'One thousand and five years'.

4900520 That's like... a felony dood!

Best story I've ever ready.

I know the guy who came up with the Zalgo meme and I am completely incapable of reading this as anything but comedy. That it isn't meant to be funny only makes it worse.

6068237 It's written years ago so no its a beginning for me there. But I've improved make no mistake.

I personally prefer the first ending because it Jack is able to continue his friendship with the mane six. The second ending is good because Jack can finally rest in peace but the problem with that is that he just discovered friendship and now he can't continue being with those he loves. I know he'll be in their hearts but I just feel like his story shouldn't end here. But that's just my opinion. But anyways this was an amazing story.

This was a great story 👏 but I think I like the first ending better, nothing wrong with this one but I like the other one better.