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I love me some L4D, and some ponies.
"know if their friendly or not!"
Should be 'they're'
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thanks for pointing that out but for me to fix that i would have to unpublish the story and then republish it so unless there is hundreds of mistakes then i wont be doing that anytime soon
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When you, specifically, read it, you can edit it and fix it
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well when i make changes to my story in an already published chapter it doesn't like to save. my computer likes being screwy with lots of similar things so i cant edit and fix it unless i unpublish, make the corrections, and republish sorry. and grammar has never been my forte, so to speak. i will, though, take that bit of info into consideration when i write. thanks anyway.
It's a cool story bro. I like what you did with the characters. The premise is awsome, and you managed to successfully recreate francis! Which is really hard, giving that guy any semblance of a personality.
But, alas... There was a point where their grammar slipped and they shamefully misused a they're in their conversation near the end. They're going to lose you some viewers if that keeps up.
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There is a save button..
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thats what im saying. the save button don't like to save when the chapter is published for me.
No offense, but I only read this because you mentioned Nobrains...I generally don't read LFD stories...no offense again...
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Oh hai there, it's a pretty good story. Hope you liked it.
I like it. I like it a lot.
L4D? Ponies?
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I'm ready.
It should be "were"
im going to love this story
Then is a comparison in time. We walked to the store, then we listen to some records when we got home.
Than is a physical comparison. I am taller than him.
Also, here's a nutshell grammar lesson on quotations:
When a line of dialogue in quotation marks isn't a question or an exclamation, it ends in a comma, not a period, followed by a descriptive phrase. The only time lines of dialogue end in a period is if there isn't a descriptive phrase afterwards (He said, she said, etc.).
Therefor, you should replace the period at the end of the quotation with a comma, and lowercase the "H" in "He".
Sorry if you feel if this is a rant. It isn't. I've noticed these errors a lot in other stories. Love the story, though.
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if you checked my blog i consider something like that not a huge deal so please check it out if you haven't. Here is a link for all of you who have yet to check it out yet.
the blog explains the reason why i don't make the changes if there are not alot.
"I hate horses" oh Francis...
MOAR NOW
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update coming tomorrow then i have to start writing up more chapters.
I don't think just any random person would be able to make a nuclear power plant explode. It isn't a nuclear bomb. Chernobyl wasn't a nuclear explosion, but a reactor leak that spewed radioactive chemicals everywhere.
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and the point of saying that was?
sorry but i don't know anything about power plants nor do i want to know anything about them. i have no intention of changing that part of it since i would have to redo the entire story as well.
1086412 Jees. Dont be a Grammer Nazi
OH YEAH!
EPIC STORY, BRO!
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LOL. Ponies have speed hax.
These chapters... they are...
short.
MOAR!
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I's are supposed to be capitalized...
Well. That went South faster than expected.
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I know they are supposed to be capitalized but for whatever reason I forget to capitalize them. I don't think its THAT big of a deal so i never go back and correct them.
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Yes, yes it did.
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No worries we'll get this done.
Am I the only one concerned that Francis said he liked something? Not diddn't hate, but outright liked! Just me... Okay then, back to my corner.
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Funfact: playing left for dead and left for dead two Francis admits he doesn't hate his vest. Therefore hinting he doesn't hate everything in existence.
1121602 that was the thing he 'diddn't hate' that I referred to. Along with Rochelle before she hated on the vest. This is on a serious note one of my favorite games and I love what your doing with the characters. I can't wait until twilight tries to figure out where they keep the pistol ammo.
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Glad to hear your liking this so far. It will be interesting.
yay
Hooray for intolerant/self-righteous ponies!
"oh shit" more like "oh you idiots!"
I noticed that you earlier put this story on hiatus. If you need help with something, don't hesitate to shoot me a pm. I'll get around to responding to it eventually.
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thanks but no thanks. the story goes on hiatus when really life gets in the way or something that is really important comes by and i cant ignore. if you checked my blog then it would have a better explanation because i don't delete any of my blog posts really.
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Must have missed it, but okay.
MOAR!
They done goofed.
Well they're fucked
Ponies, you in vewwy, vewwy bad position now! Hee hee!
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Badass time? *looks at dark-self*
Badass time! *cocks shotgun*
1148866 actually i would of saidd" um guys i have friends with big guns coming to kick all of your asses
Let's see here, Ponies reacting badly to humans walking into town, 4 zombie slaying humans in the fray, And a showdown that might be a cross between a no holds barred beatdown and a full out massacre.
HeavyMetalCommunist Approves.
:D YAY!
In the words of a very wise man:
NOW IS GOOD TIME TO RUN, COWARDS