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Nintendoboy1000


I'm an observer brony you might say. Dark and mysterious sometimes... and sometimes hyperactive. I'ma cool guy so don't feel shy ta chat with me. My bio is located on my DeviantID on Deviantart.com.

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This is a sequel to the 'Catacombs of Zalgo'. So just a heads up.

He who establishes peace and order to the world shall lead history towards eternal harmony. He who contrives war and chaos to the world shall lead humanity towards unending strife. In the world where a harmonious land lays hidden and untainted from the planet's corrupted history, both provinces remained discreetly to maintain balance... until now.

Equestria has many mysteries waiting to be unsolved... but beyond the land's boarders lies dark secrets that are beyond ones comprehension. While the Equestrians inherently thrived immaculately in harmony for many generations, they lived their lives unaware of the dangers that revolved their land. The Equestrians postulated the world that it was once ruled by peace since the beginning of time... but they will soon be proven dead wrong.

Five months since Discord had fallen once more, the ponies in Ponyville were ready to get things started for the upcoming Heartswarming Eve. However, a new threat had risen from the depths, and things became unexplainable. Armies of brutal humans with futuristic weapons and transportation units appeared out of nowhere, capturing and taking control of Cloudsdale, Ponyville, and even Canterlot. What madness came about to start such a violent act? Who is behind the siege? And what will happen to the ponies? No matter what will happen, no pony will be safe.

Comments about the chapters would be appreciated, helps my motivations a lot :)

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 19 )

T o quote a certain Noble Five: "No........... no, somebody tell me this ain't happening!!! :rainbowderp:

Sorry for the wait guys, I was too busy finding a proofreader to help me sort out past/present tenses. So far, I've been very unlucky. I'm trying to improve myself, so that were won't be any confusions within the story. So far, Salacar and Meester helped me, but now they are no longer available. Sooo yeah... if you notice any mistakes or flaws, please kindly let me know so I won't go through the trouble of postponing my releases. Anyways, more coming your way!

Thanks to WhatTheMoo and MarshMellowPony for proofreading this chapter and the others. Those guys are awesome!

Thanks to WhatTheMoo and MarshMellowPony for edit.

HO-LEEEEEEE SHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEIT

I still can't grasp the genre-shift from horror-action to all action. It's Resident Evil all over again

I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!
But fucking awesome story

Sorry I took so long, busy month. But I should be back up to speed.

The amount of "awwwwww"'s in this chapter is over 9000

Nice to see the group back together, but don't ya think they all got back together too soon? Good and all, but Fluttershy is missing out of them all and Jack got shot. :(

I loved the other story by the way! Can't wait to find out what happens next in this one! (No really!)

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Great story so far hope you enjoyed making the story as I did reading it.

4926990 As soon as I gain enough motivation to continue on, I'll try and finish up.

I wonder what that dark presence could be. On to the next chapter.

This story is amazing.:yay: I literally cried a couple of times. You are a talented writer. Please continue the story. This story is too great to stop.:fluttercry: I hope you see this message and decide to finish it because I don't care if it takes 10 years. I'll be here just to read it and that's a promise!:raritywink::yay::twilightsmile::ajsmug::pinkiesmile::rainbowdetermined2:

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