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Sharp Spark

Nothing says I miss you quite like war poetry carved in your door with a stanley knife.


Flim and Flam find themselves down and out in the Fire Swamp after another failed attempt at entrepreneurship. Turns out the inhabitants there aren't their typical kind of customers either...

A short, silly story written for the January Writeoff - The Best Medicine

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Comments ( 13 )

Faved, liked and wondering why this is tagged "Slice of Life" instead of "Comedy". Have a :moustache:.

Ha! I remember reading this.

Bravo, the ending was perfect!

This was really good.

The really impressive thing is that at no point do you actually say the words "snake oil".:moustache:

Having the entire joke be a secret just makes it better. :raritywink:

Well, I'm happy to see this one expanded. Most entertaining. Remember to oil your snakes every 10,000 miles, folks.

Ya gotta love those two. Great to see this posted, btw.

*snerk* That was delightfully evil.

Hee hee, wonder who got devoured for the bag of bits. I like to imagine it was Blueblood... :raritywink:

This was really funny. I love the chimaera's design, to be honest, and this story is an example as to why.

Decent little story.
The concoction that doesn't do anything good for a pony works wonders on snakes and since Flim and Flam aren't emotionally prepared for actually helping somepony they just don't know how to handle it.

:duck: Oh?
:raritydespair: Oh!
:raritycry: Ooooh. Right, yes. I get it now.
:facehoof: How did I miss that?

*snickers* Very nice, Poor Flim and Flam

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