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Astrocity


Wanted for writing and crimes against humanity. Mostly writing...

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Flim and Flam are at it again, and this time, they've done the unimaginable.

Marie, the accidental creation of the Flim Flam brothers, gets the chance no other marionette will ever experience -- a life. Though she can talk and act like a pony, is she a real pony? What makes a pony real? Maybe her answers lie in Ponyville...

Special thanks to MasterFrasca99 for editing this story.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 22 )

So Pinocchio is now a pony? I like it!:pinkiehappy:
I wonder if Flim and Flam will be like Geppetto or rather cat and fox.

2537789 Flim and Flam are more of a combination of Stromboli (Mangiafuoco) and the cat and fox.

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Wonderful! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by The_Man_With_the_Plan deleted Aug 23rd, 2015

Like, Favorite, Moustache! :moustache:

And I thought this story would never get updated. I love it when I'm wrong!

On one hand I am apprehensive of this, because a living puppet with that name can only be a reference to Bloody Mary... I think. The version I've heard of at least.

On the other hand, I'm bored and this is rated everyone...

3384208 its a pun on the word marionette the technical term for stringed puppet

This story has a sort of toy story charm to it. I like it!

Sparks are gonna fly when she tells them about Flim and Flam...:duck:

How long till the next chapter, I can't wait :pinkiehappy:

It feels like a pleasant surprise every time I see this story updates. Can't wait for more!

With your permission to ask man.:twilightsheepish: Why are you stopping for?:rainbowderp: How long do you take for the story to finish if you were away or writing other stories than that?:rainbowderp:

Awwwwwwww, Marie was so cute with the foals, I thought I was gonna pass out from a cuteness overload.

Huh, that´s weird. This chapter didn´t show up in my favorites. :rainbowhuh:

But anyway, great chapter, and i believe this needs to be said:
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Just getting that out of the way. :derpytongue2:

Please update soon.

Well, this might end up with a pile of splinters, and some mildly sad entrepreneurs unless an enlargement spell comes into play.

Hello! Decided to read this after filling out the survey. Looking good so far!

I would like to point out that Big Mac has never been so vocal when he's not angry. It would be more in-character for him to have less dialogue. But the thinking is about right.

I seriously feel like she should get 'grown up'. As in, like, a foot or two. Thisbjust seems the way that the path is going.

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