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Astrocity


Wanted for writing and crimes against humanity. Mostly writing...

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What is it like not knowing who you are? To be different from everyone?

When a foal is accidentally sent flying with the changelings, it is up to Chrysalis to care and raise the lost filly, though keeping her from learning about her own kind would prove more difficult than it seems. After living her whole life with changelings, this little filly's life is turned upside down when she takes her first steps outside the hive. Old tensions are revealed, and this little filly is going to learn that changelings don't have it easy. But what can filly like her do? All the answers wait for her in Equestria, where she will meet new faces and see new places.

Special thanks to Poets Dream for proofreading.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 148 )

Wow something new, i didn't see before any idea like that.
Few errors like actually Chrysalis is little taller than Celestia,
Years of planing? Damn Shining you are soo damn slow about wedding.
Something more but don't remember xD

Love the innocence of the foal, it brings many a d'aaaw moments.

Cool! :twilightsmile:
Looks like it's going to be great.

Can't wait to see how this turns up!:pinkiehappy:

This is surprisingly good. I wonder how the foal will turn out.

Hum, you have my attention! Though it always seems to be a little divided these days. I’m going to be keeping an eye on this story, has a certain fluffiness to it, like whipped cream. Not sure if that makes sense but I think you get the point (the point is I like it in case you don’t).

Best of luck with it!

Can't wait to see were it'll go from here:pinkiehappy:

I get the feeling something will go wrong, I'm just not sure what.

I assume the changeling hive is in the middle of nowhere, so running into other ponies is pretty unlikely. Perhaps some kind of encounter with a monster that she can't take care of herself?

Regardless, I look forward to the next part, keep on rocking. This story is great so far!

I saw much of ppl use "noling" for changeling version of puns everything ;p

you might be able to use noling instead.

I wonder if Twily Corn will find her.

Too cute! CANNOT THINK! :heart::pinkiehappy::yay::heart:
Liked watched and will favorite if the next chapter is just as good.

Chappy, y u so short?
Read this one in three minutes... :fluttercry:

Favorited!

I feel sad for the parents sure... but I kind of want to see where this goes :twistnerd:
please let there be some kind of happy ending :fluttershysad:

Well, this turned out interesting, a run-a-way adventure? very nice :raritywink: Though I wonder where this will go for her? :pinkiesmile:

"Lie awake in bed at night
And think about your life
Do you want to be different?
Try to let go of the truth
The battles of your youth
'Cause this is just a game"

30 SECONDS TO MARS - A BEAUTIFUL LIE,So fiting for This Story

Excellent plot progression, and while I'm sad Strongheart/Braeburn doesn't exist in this universe, I'm even more happy that Chrysalis isn't going down the 'changelings are expendable let me just kill them on a whim' route that far too many others may have done :<

... Also I feel sorry for Happy, poor guy, I hope he doesn't take the blame, seeing as he's doing his best to keep her safe ;_;

In time young Sky Walker, you will be... but for now enjoy the z's and some of that Apple family good stuff. :pinkiehappy:

"Hey look, a baby that looks kinda like me, I gonna steal It!"

"Are you sure thats a goo--"

" Fuck you! I do what I want!"

I wonder how many other background ponies we'll get to meet in the continuing adventures of Mr.Smith Goes To Washington, er, I mean, Princess Nymph Goes To Canterlot.

Aw, Nymph is so cute with Happy and Derpy/Dinky. Keep writing, I want more!

Hope this story hasn't been abandoned--it has really great potential!

Love the bit with Dinky and Derpy :derpytongue2:

Hope Nymph makes it to Canterlot. Wonder what would happen if she then met her biological parents.

I'm picturing the Pound Cake and Carrot Cake from the Slice of Life tumblr now. :raritywink: Good to see an update.

Fantastic! Yay! Been waiting for this, and it was just as good as I imagined it to be :3
(Though, "It's not as good as it tastes"? Do you mean 'looks'?)

MOAR. WHY IS THERE NO MOAR.

I love the name to DEATH i like were this is going :rainbowkiss:

Great story! Waiting for the next chapter! :D

Is this still in progress?

OMAGOODNESSILOVETHIS!

The song I thought of the moment I finished the chapter

And then it stopped.
This is pretty good so far, maybe an update?
Keep going! ;)

I really enjoyed the story so far. :twilightsmile:

Sad to see that it hasn't updated in a couple years. :fluttercry:

Love the story so far and I cannot wait to read more. I do hope this has a happy ending for the changelings and Chrysalis. I find it quite cute how worried "mommy Chrissy" is being, it is obvious she really does love Nymph a lot. :twilightsmile:

I don't think Julibee should be Braburn's wife. they don't live in the same town.

6180189 Eh, was thinking along the lines of her moving out of Dodge. Seeing how there were Oranges that were related to Apples, I thought it was weird how the whole family expansion and name thing worked, so I just went with this. But anyway, this story is pretty old.

6180189 Cherry Jubilee could have moved to Braeburn's town.

Hmm, an interesting idea. I've added this to my read laters.

Okay, why did Nymph and Happy get off at Ponyville? Their goal is Canterlot and the train was heading for it? :facehoof:

I think Chryssy genuinely cares about Nymph

I'm kinda wondering if this will turn out like the Amish sabbatical-thing, where the youth are allowed a certain time to explore the world and decide if they want to return or not.
Though, if she does go back they'll definitely need to work harder to keep her there....
Keep going! ;)

6180202 but she was head of the ranch. so i can't see her leaving. maybe another cherry but not her.

And no Pinkie's welcome to ponyville party, she's slacking in her old age.

I like and I hope for more :3

Oh that poor foal... she going to have her heart broken. Ah Chrysalis, kind yet very cruel at the same time, good times.

Hahaha, my interest is officially piqued.

Cya
Raziel-chan

I hope there'll be more, I like it a lot so far.

Yeah, Chryssie, keep telling yourself it's only about your plan. You don't consider Nymph your child at aaaaaaaaaall~

Cya
Raziel-chan

There will be a moment, I foresee, where Nymph decides to try to change, and DOES. Dun dun duuuuuun

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