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Astrocity


Wanted for writing and crimes against humanity. Mostly writing...

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Rather than taking the apple from you, she takes a bite out of it, still in your hand.

Deliberate. Eye. Contact.

Instant fav. Will there be a sequel to this? Perhaps he will stay, at least for a little bit.

I like this. Short and sweet. Heartwarming.

this really got me in the feels. thanks for the reminder to stop and smell the roses.


if you ever decide to continue this, in the same vein as human rituals or other, "moments in time" with the mane 6, please do.

i cant imagine twilight's reaction to meeting someone as a filly just getting accepted as celestias student doing her first assignment in the library and seeing another human on a train years later.


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I thought about writing that actually and with the other main characters, but I feel like if I continued with this idea, I would have to change the tone it's written in and find a way to not make the whole encounter thing redundant. The ending I wrote for this basically just ended the whole idea. And this was just a little thing for a friend. Besides, this took exactly one year to write. :pinkiegasp:

Thanks for reading!

Simply a wonderful little story. Thank you for sharing it with us!:twilightsmile:

That....was beautiful!

Warmed my heart to the core! And you know it's an Apple core.

I had a bad day at work and this perked me up. Thank you.

6851444 here here!

This was cute. :twilightsmile:

I love this so much. :twilightsmile:

This was awesome. That ending...that was great. Well done :twilightsmile:

I normally dislike 2nd Person stories, but this was sweet and very enjoyable.

I enjoyed this fic, not only was it well made, but very cute when it came to imagery.

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