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Well, first off let me just tell you that i officially am a fan of LunaCord or whatever the name of this ship is.... I apologize for my idiocy. Lol but anywho a pairing of two of my favorite characters i mean it's just fucking perfect. And i would soooooo love a second chapter or sequel. I just want more!
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Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it :-) I was surprised at how much fun it was to work with this pairing.
Luna has blue eyes.
Fun read though, I like how you went with Luna with a slight bondage fetish
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This is what I brought you this you can keep,
This is what I brought you may forget me.
I promise to depart just promise one thing,
Kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep.
aaaaww
that was soooo sweet ^^ i really enjoyed this story :D
i love this pairing ^^ its so rare but it makes so much sense o.o
ich hope SOOOOOOO much you will write a sequel ;DD
that would be absolutely amazing ^^
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Ha! You knew what I was going for :-)
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Thank you so much! I hadn't intended to write a sequel, but if enough people ask for it, maybe I can add on another chapter.
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Whoops! Thank you. Sometimes her eyes look green to me.
5724778 i sooo hope for it ^^
5724776 Eeyup. A shorty but a goody. Ever heard the mashup between that and LP's In the End?
I know too much 'bout music, 'specially for my age
Hence the profile pic
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No! I'll have to look that up!
While I'm a fluttercord shipper, I always found Discord/Luna to make more sense than Dislestia. Both were imprisoned and become outsiders in Equestria after being reformed. In canon, Luna visits his dreams, there is a possible romance right there. So overall Fluttercord make sense because of the canon plotline in tv show where she is his only friend, Twicord make sense because they are both smartest creatures in Equestria and LunaCord make sense because they have similar past. Dislestia however is yet to make sense if ever going to be explored in S5.
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I'm wondering if they're going to explore Dislestia in season 5 at all. They left that little teaser with Discord giving her flowers at the end of season 4. I originally was a Dislestia fan, but I'm leaning closer to Disluna now. Like you said, their relationship just makes more sense. I don't know if I see them as lovers, or more as mutual friends who shared similar punishment. I might explore with it some more.
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Yeah turned out that the flowers were just added by storyboard artist, Sibsy. She recently hinted that she might add a fluttercord ship tease in S5 Smooze episode so i guess she just give all shippers some fuel(she also repsonsible for Cheerilee/BigMac in the background). Who knows maybe DisLuna will be next?. However i woudn't canonize any ship until it is written by a writer and detailed in the actual dialogue
What a fascinating story! I love every single aspect of it, and, believe or not, the sex wasn´t my favorite part. I mean it. That´s right. Don´t judge me! I´m still a manly man reading fanfiction about how two characters from a kids show get busy.
Anyway, I really loved the concept, the narrative and the characterization. The descriptions were quite eloquent, and I must say I was pleasantly surprised. You don´t expect that beauty in the description of a one shot porn relate. Anyway. The characters were great; I love Discord and Luna, and this is how I can imagine them reacting if the situation ever presented. Damn, I´m sure that that is how Discord actually flirts. The character development was magnificent; they actually felt hum...-equine. And I must say it was quite sweet. I had no idea I could enjoy romance so much; I don´t usually give it a chance. And the humor... good Celestia, Discord is hilarious! I literally burst out laughing with some of his lines. Porn that makes you laugh? Are you kidding me?!
Talking about the sex, I think it was alright. I like the pace and the fact that both of them are actually committed, and that, in fact, the sex kinda seems like a tool to explore the characters. But if you want my opinion about the sex, it was great. Not mind blowing, but it really didn´t have any flaws.
So, summarizing, great job. I really enjoyed this piece of yours.
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Wow...Thank you so very much! I'm used to working with Luna, but this was my first chance with Discord. I'm so glad that his character came through! He is definitely a lot of fun to work with. I greatly appreciate your kind words regarding my writing. It really helps to bolster my confidence. Thank you so much!
I didn't check the author before reading this. When the "... she wished black hooves ..." came up, I instantly had this suspicion and had to check. Haha, it is you!
It's really nice. Well done!
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Thank you very much! This is quite different from what I usually write, but I just had to give it a try. I may write a "deleted scene" between Luna and Sombra that's more in this genre. We'll have to see.
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You have all my support! I'd love to read more like this from you. And if you'd like some accompanying picture drawn to go with it, I'm up for that. :)
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Thank you!! I'll let you know if I get some ideas for the story. I always love art to go with it, especially amazing art like yours. :-)
I finally read this, and even though i didn't really like the sex-part, i was completely awwwwwww
at the end. You described their loneliness so well!
Good job, this was really well-written
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Thank you very much! If you don't mind me asking, when you say you didn't really like the sex-part, is that because you don't like to read that sort of genre, or because I wrote it poorly? I only ask so that if it's the latter, I can work on improving my writing. Thanks for taking the time to read it!
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So don't worry, your story is amazing!
No,no it was actually written very well but it's the genre that i don't like.
I really loved this fic--I'm a hardcore Celestiacord shipper, and I still really LOVED this fic
It's very well written, you captured the characters well, and you did a very thorough examination of a character relationship that we don't really see in the show. And regarding your author's note at the end, the thing I liked most about this story was that it was mature, but it wasn't another 'we're both miserable, let's make each other even more miserable with sex' fic. It feels like so many of these kinds of stories involve, as you said, 'one character completely taking advantage of another.' And not that there haven't been good stories that take that tack, but I appreciated how realistic this was in terms of finding a sweet spot between two people perfectly in love and making love and two people just taking out their aggressions with sex. Luna and Discord each needed a certain kind of comfort from each other and received it in a beautiful (if still fun/slightly kinky lol) way that was as much heartwarming as it was sexy :)
Keep up the awesome work, this was great!
Great story but I do have a question?Do you think the you could write Luna with Sombra in that king of way ;)
Great story but I do have a question?Do you think the you could write Luna with Sombra in that king of way ;)
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I might be able to write a "deleted scene" of sorts from "Before the Dawn" and put Luna and Sombra in this sort of scenario.
So far, this is the only LuCord fic that I've read.
Please, please, please
make a sequel for this 
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Oh my goodness! Thank you so much! You do such a lovely job of reading the story. It's so strange to hear it read back to me haha, but in a good way! I added a blog about this great honor.
5806726 hi azure! Awesome to see you here too
5806726 I totally agree!
7521161 Hi! Lol it's been so long since I commented that I almost forgot about it but thanks for the reply
7521889 no problem
I love this story.
Absolutely wonderful. A fantastic expose of both characters emotions and struggles.
I loved it. And the pairing makes sense (though I am a Fluttercord supporter). It was very well written.
You know what, this ship makes way more sense than any other Discord ship. They are both from a bygone era, both where imprison and to some extent both went mad. I’m surprised this isn’t more popular.
A VERY WELL WRITTEN PIECE WITH A LOT OF SENSITIVITY !!!!! BRAVO !!!!