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would you like to help with that
9058752
uhhhh no. Just use some editing program. Like Grammarly.
9058758would you believe I cant get that program in full
like seriously I have to pay a monthly fee so
I AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNN'TTT HAVIN THAT SHIT
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o-okay
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oh don't worry I'm not mad at you I was just making a point
Faved. But amour sounds more like love or a place to store clothes than armor/armour.
Otherwise keeping reading.
Still you need some editing. Basically this is fine.
Just a few bits of screwed up language.
What is too much is the story I think and trust me I am usually very forgiving on what the story is.
This is not too bad but let's recap.
Some guy you get (still in school) became interested in blacksmithing, and after a very short period (still in school or at least close to graduation...) owns a two story house with no worries.
Then has their female friend who is 4 foot 3 inches just agree to join them in what is suppose to be an interdimensional adventure because reasons.
Then during the beginning of said journey to Equestria makes it through dimensions to meet Luna in the dreamscape and accost her while she is dealing with her duties?
Then decided that the main character needs to use the rest room?
I usually tend to like crack fics but this doesn't like a crack fic to me.
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Then don't pay? Use spelling/grammar check on any program for word editing from the last 20 years except maybe basic notepad. Wordpad, Microsoft word, open office, what ever mac uses should all have a free function that would cover the remaining bits for you...
Really. It would help. Your grammar and spelling is not that bad so far. You just need a little help on that end.
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thank you for the details it is hard for me to get good and well defined detail in much of what I do/read esc. Also the two humans will get more details in the next chapter just to clear up some things. I will also be going over the mishaps manually because some of those programs are kinda shoddy with me using them
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No problem and anytime I can reply to help I will.
No way to git gud (that's still funny to me...) with out feedback.
I hope everypony is enjoying the story so far
p.s. no need to be shy when posting your thoughts in the comments
I like it. The story has promise it has so much potential can't wait to see which direction you take it
What does DIY stand for?
9087965
it stands for, Do It Yourself
Hey, love the story!
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tanks
So cool great story
9197777
thank yous
IT'S ALIVE PRAISE BE TO FAN FICTION JESUS!!
Pretty kewl my dood.
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Why thank you
Who the fuck is Raven?
I want more
Is this dead? Plz continue
Not dead. I'm just tweaking the next chapter
9783234
Still tweaking it?
Need more please!
*poking with a stick* Still alive?
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Yes it's alive but sleeping currently. I have no idea where to go with it.
More please 🥺
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Sorry but my muse for this story is being very stubborn with her inspiration allotment