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Rene9adeKni9ht
Writer, artist, and a fan of mlp. Rainbow Dash is my favorite pony, though I really can't have favorites - I love them all. I can take request for stories but I only do human in Equestria stories.
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Yah!!! My first story and I think its going great. I hope you all enjoy it as it continues.
Although I'm not a huge Skyrim fan, this is actually very interesting! I'm looking forward to more from this story!
However, if I can suggest, how would you like me to proofread your story? It has a few areas that look a bit clunky that I'm sure I could iron out. If not, I understand, just a thought~!
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Well first off thank you for your opinion! It really means a lot man. And as far as proofreading goes, let me know what you think of this thus far and of the future chapters yet to come. Its gonna take me a while because I'm old fashioned and I am writing it all out in a notebook. Any and all opinions are welcomed.
This isn't really very relavent but Adept is rank for mages not a completely different thing
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Yeah I know, but I felt like that I was using the word 'mage' too much to say what they are. There are some adapts amongst them but you'll have to wait until either for the rest of this story or a sequel.
Someone's first story? Time to dive in and see how well you do.
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You're in for a surprise then. So I encourage you to stick around and enjoy the ride.
After reading this prologue, I have to say I think you missed the comedy tag, cause there seems to be a lot of silly things going on, mostly with the narrative. Besides that, seems promising so far.
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Yeah I probably should have added in the comedy tag but in later chapters it won't be as silly... trust me, its gonna get real emotional. Thank you for reading by the way
I like this. I also love skyrim
Wait was that spell one that can turn someone into a vampire. Interesting I will read more to learn
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Oh no. In the elder scrolls games you become a vampire by contracting vampirism when you're attacked by a vampire. Ren was a vampire but now he's not. You'll find out more in the following chapters.
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I'm glad that you like it! Stick around, for this journey has only begun.
That was quite interesting. I cant wait till the next chapter.
Update?
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I'm currently working on it. Sorry it's taking so long -- life has been kicking me in the *beep* lately but I've got things settled.