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knight-ajax


i am dead, yet ever living, i am humble, yet proud, i heal, but i kill, i am wrath, but i am also mercy, what am i?

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You don't need to tag your story with [displaced] in the title.

Tales of the Forge

Sounds much better than

[Displaced] Tales of the Forge

Doesn't it?

9341572
it's just a warning so people don't get pissed with me for not warning them

9341572
However, it does help others to find Displaced stories if they type in the word in the site's search engine.

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You could maybe put it in the description then, at the top in bold.
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Good point.

9341603
do I tell you how to wright? nope I don't think so, shister off!

9341609
Don't respond negatively to criticism and suggestions, otherwise, you might discourage readers, attract trolls, or draw the attention of the more serious critics.

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loct'zet, sorry, I was in a bad mood. I haven't eaten in 12 hours. some idiot decided to trash the hydraulic lines on my forklift

9341683
Ah, alrighty then. Sorry about that!

Cool to see a displaced about a different darksiders character. Definitely interested in this

Its great I’ve only recently got into the Darksiders fandom and this story looks great

Interessting I shall be watching this with great intrigue

keep up the good work

I'd say this is a seven out of ten so far, please continue.

He stepped on an I.E.D. and all he lost were two toes and an eye?!! :applejackconfused: Damn! That dude's got either one heck of a guardian angel or the Devil's luck. Also, he's really bad at business. :rainbowlaugh: A bag of stuff from a random stranger with no money for $1,895,250.5 plus tax? He done got himself get screwed harder then every man in history combined. And not in a good way. :twilightoops:

But I still find this interesting. I'll give it a follow and see where this goes.

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he's not bad at business he just needed to get rid of his stock, he didn't need the money... silence gnarl!!

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NEVER! :rainbowdetermined2: Evil has Standards. One of them is good business sense. if you can get two gold when you only paid one, Kill them and make it three! :pinkiecrazy::rainbowlaugh:

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But seriously, if you've spent time, energy and resources, not to mention countless hours slaving over the anvil hammer in hand just to up and give all your time and effort away for practically nothing? That just doesn't make much sense at all.

I'm an amateur blacksmith and while I would make a few projects and give them away as gifts I would most certainly not just give away the stock he did on a whim. I'd have put to much care into making those and would want something for my troubles.

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huh your a amateur blacksmith and i'm an amateur gunsmith, but no normally he would not sell that low but that stuff was gathering dust, left overs from clients you did not pay, stuff like that.plus :rainbowderp:the stuff in the bag are going to be worth it:pinkiehappy:

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This is a displaced story. I have no doubt the stuff in the bag will be worth it. :pinkiehappy: Looking forward to seeing what goodies he did get.

Hmm, I wonder what stories of past events they’ll tell him?

short... but it gets the ball rolling. looking forward to more.

I don't know why, but every time Arthur is speaking in my head i hear a Scottish accent.

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Same here man, can't help but read it that way

Also great chapter man, its lookin great so far

9421244
as you should, all makers speak like that

for making awesome story that's why😀

I read the first chapter for about five seconds, then I stopped. Just...what the fuck were you thinking when you started writing this?

9425563
i have no idea. my brain does not work right so i could have been thinking about where to go for date night with my gf's when this popped in and i thought "hey this is good... let's wright it" idfk

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Welcome to 90‰ of this website

Love the idea, but needs a little more editing. Is this all self edited or do you have an editor?

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I do it by myself my sister helps now and again. Though If your offering please pm me

Isn't promethium a liquid fuel from the 40k vers?

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yes and no promethium is in fact real, i know that shocked me to, but it's crazy rare, im talking 5.864 GRAMS in the entire earths crust.

feed me more chapters

9477775
it's on the way, i'm a busy guy give me a break

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no it's not done. lifes been... hard so far, what with the move, the fixxing of the house, ext. i just have not had the time to write... oh and sol fucking me over, can't forget that mf. welcome to the land of the midnight sun,

I understand how you feel I used to be poor at one point in time as well however I recently with remove and well I know practically nothing of the surrounding area I am in so just stand up and fight it once more for Texas

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thanks, the move isnt till like spring next year but up here, thats practically next week

9651772
If that's practically next week you can start writing again now right:pinkiehappy:

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

Hey y'all, sorry I haven't been posting anything new lately, kinda have to get through college now. but hey you can start calling me doctor in a few years time, so there's that. I'm starting to work on the next chapter very soon so hopefully we should be seeing it within the month. till then Ajax, out!

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