Trixie summons a human into Equestria! But The human has other plans other than bringing her fame and glory. Come join the adventures of a lost human and his travels across this brightly colored world and discover that friends come in all sizes.
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This was a pretty good fic my only complaint is that there was too much inner conflict in the beginning for me at least it got irritating with all of his inner fights. It got better in the end though so all is forgiven
Why is chapter 9 missing?
"TAKING THE GIRL AND THE LOOT BYE!!" Dude I lost it after that. I laughed so hard I started crying. Loved the story and I hope to se more from ya.
Sweet! Good story.
Who are they!?
loving it so far!
Really interesting to see the,mane six as the bad guys
F**king brilliant.
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Bro dis is SO ASOME! man you make me believe she died! u are cruel!!!!! but asome! but cruel! AGHHHHHHHH
P.S. Thumps up, gonna fav your story in fanfiction xD and read it of course!
.... the name of this only make me thing of ezreal from LoL XD
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lAbbsjT3gJ4&list=PLRILbAMFFjpylaGy_c9EAVyL2oPMtS4ol&index=1
Dawwwwwwww. So adorable. I really hope that she doesn't have ulterior motives. That would break my heart
Oh shit. He ate a flower. Those are incredibly poisonous to humans(obviously depends on the flower) daisies are indigestible and will burn calories in an attempt to digest it which won't work.
Also, what is up with Daniel getting hurt so much? I mean its sometimes funny and humorous, but the repetition just gets old
Wow. This story is beautiful. Just absolutely beautiful. I applaud you for your work on this story and urge you to keep writing! This was absolutely beautiful I teared up when I thought that glitter died
Wow dicks much, kicked a nigga out just for eating eggs, haha little assholes
Sapphire bout to catch these hands if she ain't stop being a bitch
Trixie my nigga chill the f*** out it was a half lie to protect everyone god damn
lol nigga ate dirt at the end
Is anything real? Who am I? What is life? WHAT IS REALITY?
You should make another one of these. That wasn't a suggestion by the way. Make another one...
CHAMELEON COMMANDS IT
Two complaints.
1. Story seemed somewhat rushed.
2. So. MANY. PUNCTUATION. ERRORS!!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 9 is "How can you measure what you can't hold?"
That end was just so, so awesome!
Thanks for a very good story
Your characterization is... poor. I don't understand Michael's or Sapphire's motivations to do or say the things they do. Trixie is decent, I guess, but it's hard to screw up a one dimensional bitch in a short amount of time.
You have a terrible inability to show the passage of time and space, and you seem to forget details between chapters. If you write again, you really need an editor.
This was better than I thought it'd be. The ending was fun and cute.
But you really, really, really need a competent editor to fact check you and reign in your careless tendencies.
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it's rape the ulterior motive is rape.
but nah it's cute as fuck i'm just now reading the story sooooooo
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yeah i love the story maybe a little extra help would be really good just to knock it up that extra lvl.
Well, it's official: he has the sword of Thundera.
This particular chapter was pretty good!!!
Also, FIRST!!!!1one!
I ship it. 'Nuff said.
So sad!!! :'(
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Truuuuu!!!!!!!
The only thing stopping this story from being absolute gold are the spelling/grammar errors!!!!!!
I knew they would ship from the start. I love this ship. I love this story. So much LOVE!!!!!♡♡♡♡♡!!!!!!!
♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡/10 ship rating!
My ship... it thrives♡!♡!♡!♡!
That cliffhanger, oh mah gawd!!!
I feel like this has been edited several times, and that some things may have been lost in doing so by accident. Also, I'm pretty sure i read this before, but it was just slightly different... very slightly diff, can't put me finger on it, but I am sure i have read this before.
AWWWW. I didn't want this one to end. Great job!
Dialogue is always nice to have, but body language is just as important, especially if they come from an important main character such as Trixie. Try more of that the next time you write dialogue. Besides, it's easy to imagine Trixie roll her eyes at a concerned friend's reaction, perhaps maybe before her dialogue starts in this quote...
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hes a magnet for disaster
The beginning of a Gary Stu? Most likely...
This will get interesting...
Remember that Gary Stu comment?
STEP ONE: SECURE THE KEYS!!!
Bad guy spotted!
Welcome back to the Matrix Neo...
SIlvertophat. Thou have been marked by Gravity. We shall keep watch of thy progress on this site, as well as Fanfiction.net. May thee never have writers block, and may thy updates be regular.
(in all seriousness, I've been watching this story for years on fanfiction. i really hope you finish it. i love it. Cant wait for the voidlord to update.)
looked right at Celestia and yelled.
“TAKING THE GIRL AND THE LOOT BYE!!”
Then I dove through the portal backwards and the last things I remember seeing was the stunned expressions of everypony in the room.
Fucking genius. Exactly what I would pull.
These first couple of chapters are really just exposition and little else...
I'm concerned and somewhat offput by the fact that he didn't push for a way home.
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This. If it doesn't improve I'm ditching.
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Ikr she's being really unreasonable. Guess that's how half-dimensional characters go.
Eh chapter. It leads to somewhere though, I might go a few more chappies