Not really big on fanfic writing, but when I'm in the mood I'll jot something down from time to time. I'd much rather frequent sites like YouTube, DeviantArt, and Facebook
Derpy doesn't like Hearts and Hooves Day.
Who can blame her?
Popular Section - 15th of February 2015. Thank you everypony for reading this story. Your kindness is appreciated eternally as always. (takes a polite bow, smacks head on his laptop)
OW! I need to stop doing that or I'll have a concussion...
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This is amazing. It just seems to pull you right off the bat, and it's so relatable.
Thank you.
5626707 I kinda rushed a bit at the end. I wanted to make it a bit longer but I'm not exactly the best story writer on this site. I struggled to think of a really good way to make the last part moving and stuff, and I really wanted to get it done today, so apologies for rushing the ending.
Having said that, you have my appreciation and thanks for reading the story. I hope you got some enjoyment/amusement out of it, and I wish you a pleasant day or evening. (bows politely)
Well played
5626819 Thanks.
I hope this story does better than my others of recent have done. I tried to be good on this one.
Sad, but not too sad. Well written. I like this.
5626928 You do? Then I guess I did something right with this.
Thanks for reading. I tried to do better with this story. I hope the effort made does pay off. Seeing how you and several others like this so far, I think it might do.
5626951 I don't write myself, so I cant really hate something unless its just a plain awful idea with no grammar whatsoever. But some stand out as above average, and this is definitely one. Hope you write more like this!
5626971 I can only promise to try.
I'm not particularly brilliant at story writing. I've not had much luck save for a few stories that have done very well if I may say so, but I will promise to try.
My best is the best I can really do after all, right?
Anything to make people like you smile and laugh. If you can enjoy it, I'm happy enough. :)
Would you like a Follow, or did I already give you one? I've given out quite a few Follows at random in the past ten minutes I've already forgotten who I've followed. XD
Kids can be cruel. Bright side is that she didn't go all 'Carrie' on everypony. At least, she has Dinky!
5627038 Kids are cruel. And some people are very in touch with their inner child.
It's a good story, but I wish there was more to it. Even so, not all endings have to be happy ones.
Very well written, and from a differing perspective than usual on such things. I like it.
T_T poor derpy... why the sad ending?
T_T my story is still being looked over. its about the God of righteousness and awesomeness (Freddie mercury) giving someone the power to kill all the trolls. he uses the power to protect derpy and kill millions of horrible people and ponies alike.
Derpy has always been a favorite of mine. and people bad mouthing her and such always pissed me off. there is no sin in being different from others. really its a blessing. I have beaten people into a pulp for so much as staring at my sister's eyes. granted my sister doesn't have Strabismus but shes blind and her eyes are all gunky looking. but she is smarter, kinder and a better person than anyone else I know. and I don't care if its wrong. Violence will ALWAYS be my reaction to anyone who disrespects her
5627913 I struggled at the end. I wanted to make it a bit longer and add a bit more depth, but I'm not as good a story writer as a lot of people on this site. And I wanted to get the story out before Valentine's Day was over as well. I kinda rushed a bit with the ending and I apologize for that.
Still, you have my gratitude for still opting to give this a read, so thank you very much sincerely for that generosity.
I know that feel, Derpy. Just know that on the other side of the Wall, there are millions of bronies who would love NOTHING more than to snuggle you until you turned into a pile of adorable, wall-eyed goo.
Nice story. Relatable and well-written, with a good moral at the end. Well done.
In the backstory of Of Mares and Magic Derpy crashed into Fluttershy's cottage, and Fluttershy helped heal her, and long story short they hooked up.
And then this one says
New headcanon: This is the prequel to that backstory.
5631638 Wow I had no idea. I never heard of that story. Is that really what happened?