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Regidar


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Scootaloo and Rumble head out from town one night, and head north. To the north, there are hills nopony every goes to. They'll be alone, in the dark stretch of land no one bothered to explore.


An attempt in minimalism.

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“Not like that! I mean, just... I don’t want to be out all alone with me, so... why would you want to be?”

That saddened me...

Stories like this make me remember why I followed you. We'll done, Regi. I loved this. :heart:

Wingardium Leviosa. LOVED IT!!!

That was so good. You are really able to work the simplistic value that is what makes one pagers really good! Hope to see more of this!

An enjoyable read. Rumble needs to grow, but he can take his time. Scoots will help him do that, though, so all is okay... for now.

Eeeee my OTP! I loved this soooo much! :pinkiehappy::heart:

(Yeah, I'm a pretty big dork for Rumbleoo :derpytongue2:)

“L-Love you... but nothing lasts forever, y’know? And ponies say... ponies say that young love doesn’t last, and that if you stick with just one mare or stallion throughout your young life, you’ll never really find yourself, so I mean...”

Carpe diem, Rumble, carpe diem...

This was quietly beautiful.

5226515 I'd be worried if you considered it loud, considering the format.

So thanks for that.

An attempt in minimalism.

The attempt was successful. The story's got a great theme, and one that a lot of people reading can probably relate to in some form. I know that I do. This is a great example of what I love about your style: it makes the theme obvious yet still allows the reader to think about that theme, without the story making any judgement for them. As a young person like Rumble, I feel that same sort of pressure and the "fact" that love doesn't last, but as you pointed out, the probably end of romance doesn't mean you shouldn't try it in the first place. You've stuffed more truth into 1000 words than I could into ten times that amount.

Scootaloo’s bright orange coat stood out in the dark night, but Rumble’s own darker coat hid him from site.

Even though sight it misspelled, gotta love a good rhyme.

Much love for the AnCo reference.

That was pretty minimal but it told me everything I needed to know. I like these kinds of stories, It lets the reader fill in the blanks.

Oh, another Rumbaloo...


and another reason to why I follow you.

I decided to read this thanks to a blog post by the parasprite, and I'm glad I read it. The use of minimalism was well done and the relationship between Scootaloo and Rumble had a nice, warm quality to it. It's stories like these that remind me why Scootaloo x Rumble is a ship I really like. Well done, and keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

5230052

This story was a bit exposition heavy for my tastes

literally one paragraph in the beginning of the story was exposition :trixieshiftleft:

5230073 Hm, okay. You learn something new everyday.

Awww. :heart:

The attempt was definitely a success. Another good story from Regi. :)

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