Just some random person on the internet that writes stories about a show with ponies. I try not to suck at writing. Am I good at it? I don't know. I just do it for fun.
When looking for something for show and tell at school, Apple Bloom has nothing. Applejack suggests that Apple Bloom take her bow, but Apple Bloom sees nothing special about it.
Applejack tells Apple Bloom how she got her bow and how special it is.
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Sweat Apple Acres xD
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Did I misspell something?
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Yea, you called it "Sweat Apple Acres" instead of "Sweet Apple Acres". But it's no big deal; I know what you meant. Just found it fitting actually because they work so hard on the farm.
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Fixed.
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XD It was fine, really! I just have a sharp eye.
So sad, yet so touching.
Nice story but there are a few minor spelling issues.
"A lighting bolt got away, we heard two screams and we looked and saw that they were dead." said the red color pegasus, " We tried how best bur there was nothing we could do."
"But" is spelled "bur" there.
I enjoyed this storya lot. Very touching.
Although the atmosphere was slightly ruined when Braeburn gave Applejack a smile of engorgement. It was quite a funny/strange mistake, I doubt you meant that, because that would mean his smile made things grow, or something. Encouragement is the word.
Freaken cried
*sniffs*
:slowclap: beautiful.
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Fixed.
Nothing like a good cry
... thats all that needs to be said.
In several spots you've mixed up "there" and "they're".
(There: positional "There she is!" - They're: 'to be' verb contraction of 'they are' "They're nice ponies." - Their: Plural possessive "Their best saddles.")
The story is lovely and sweet. I'm glad you shared it.
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you almost forgot to mention 'how' should be 'our'.
The only thing that I can think of that gets my point across now is how this story managed to give me a feel
A few spelling/grammar errors, (which can't be avoided sometimes) but still a good story. I always had the headcanon that Applejack's hat, Big Mac's collar and Apple Bloom's bow came from their parents, glad to see other people sharing that idea.
GOD DAMNIT! MANY TEARS!
Beautiful. Just *Braces* *Looks* Beautiful.
*Punched by Giant*
Adorable.
A few errors, but it was incredibly touching.
...
to sappy for my tatses but good nonetheless.
sniff.... oh screw it (starts balling)loved it i will never see apple blooms bow the same
This just proves it they are closer like two peas in a pod.
That was a really sweet story! Amazing job!
i'm not crien...i'm not crien...!! T_T