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xxGamer101xx


Just some random person on the internet that writes stories about a show with ponies. I try not to suck at writing. Am I good at it? I don't know. I just do it for fun.

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No matter, Derpy just smiled and ate her muffins. Her life changed when she met Doctor Whooves.They all tease and make fun of her. Call her a klutz and mock her. But he doesn't. He just smiles and holds out his hoof and off they go. Into his big blue box of mysteries and adventure.

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Comments ( 61 )

Awwwww! I think imma die from the fluff! :rainbowkiss: *faves and upvotes*

Also... FIRST!

*squee* I love this so much!:derpytongue2:

I loved a few missed spelled words but I liked it

DoctorxDerpy shipfic? :pinkiegasp: MUST READ LATER!:derpytongue2:

I'm astonished. This story... Amazing! If I could I would erase it from my memory just so I may read it a second time with the same impact! :pinkiehappy:

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I'm not all that big on the "Doctor Whooves" fanon idea, given I'm not into Dr. Who at all really. So I tend to avoid stories focused on him. This one has caught my eye.

It may not be perfect, but it definitely has personality. :rainbowkiss:

LOVE.
Nothing more to say than LOVE.

Fantastic. Absolutely fantastic.

10th comment, I will read after I finish what I am curently readin, already faved! I love doctor and Derpy stories!
dtlux1

Predicting 11th comment...
Not that I care or anything :twilightsheepish:
Anyways, badass fic you've got their man, loved it from begining to end! Keep up the great work and make MOAR!
ENGLMANE LOOOOOOOOOL

Ha so much win :yay:
that story is just the thing I need after rolling through the tragedy section and stuff like that. :fluttershyouch:
But enough of that I think Im going to make this a favorite just to read when I feel down.... While eating a muffin perhaps as this story brings a warm smile to my face. :derpytongue2:

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That is a strange gif...I take it you liked my story?

I noticed a couple references, other than the fact that it is doctor who and all..

I found them for you, you're welcome.

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You sir, have won the internet and all the cookies and muffins it has to offer.

So many D'aaawwws :rainbowkiss:
So many feels :heart:
And so much Derpy :derpytongue2:

I really liked this. I think you should have worked on it a bit more, but nonetheless you earned my up vote!

I think the 'Englmane' bit was too far a stretch, myself, and the last paragraph felt awkward. Other than that, a decent little story.

This story was very touching I liked it a lot had some grammar errors but what story doesn't.

Great Job :pinkiehappy:

Nice. I am hooked

It's good, but I think you should get a proofreader. I've caught a few mistakes here and there.

1638961 :twilightsheepish: Sorry about that. Thank you for the feedback, I'll make sure to look over my errors.

The 1 problem I have with this story is. Ya play up Dash as an asshole! Dash is not an asshole! Did you see the cutie mark Chronicles? Dash would never do that! I don't know why you would make Rainbow say that. But she would never do that! Other than that this story surprised the hell out of me. You get a 8.5/10

I love this. The only bad thing to come out of this is the worst pony city name pun EVER.

"EnglMane"

Just......no, okay. No.

Oh, and the last line is 'his companion', but the story is called 'His assistant'. ?
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Dash is an Asshole. In the Crystal empire episodes, she's a total jerk to Fluttershy in the jousting scene.

1697917 Yeah well guess what

Ok I agree she was being a total jerk to Fluttershy, but insulting sompony like she did here was clearly out of character. Rainbow Dash stood up for Fluttershy in the cutie mark chronicles! The way she was betrayed here was, BULLSHIT!!!!! TOTAL UDDER FUCKING BULLSHIT!!!!!!!!!!!! :flutterrage:

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Through Watching all the episodes, I've learned that all the elements but Fluttershy,and Pinkie are jerks. And Pinkie is insane, which means only Fluttershy is that much of a likable person.

Twilight is cruel to Spike, Rainbow has been both jerky and egotistical on several occasions, Apllejack is waaay too protective of her sister, and Rarity is whiny and needy. Plus the mare do well incident makes everyone seem like a jerk, but I forgive :pinkiehappy: and :yay: because they have never been very mean.

Except the 2 occasions when Flutters went nuts, but I needed someone out of the 6 to be a non jerk/nutcase, so we'll forgive those too.

1698071 I will have to agree with Twilight, Applejack, and I really have to agree with you on Rarity. I disagree with Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash. While RD is egotistical but not a jerk. And even if she is she is still down right cruel, a jackass, a shithead, and totally not the real RD in this story. AND FLUTTERSHY IS CRUEL! I can tell just beneath her kind disguise that there is something going on! SHE IS INSANE! Hell, she even kills innocent animals! What do you think she is feeding the bear? Dirrito's? I think not!

1697917
I apologize for the awful city pun.
Forgive me? :applecry:

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Maybe she hires a griffin fisherman? Griffins eat meat.

1700085
...Okay, i forgive you.

1700085
It was the best you could do.
And yes, I do scroll through my favourite stories' comments.
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:yay: Brilliant. Couple'a spelling errs, but still. Nicely done.

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Thank you. No matter what, spelling errors always haunt me.

There were tears. Kudos.:fluttercry:

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Thank you for those comets, I'm sorry though that I made your cry. I hoped you liked it.

2074391 It was good tears, though, tears full of feels. They're the best kind of tears.

Something old :trollestia:
Somthing new :scootangel:
Something borrowed :heart:
Something blue :trixieshiftleft:

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A madman's big blue box. :twilightsmile:

I saw when this chapter was posted, but I didn't want to read it because of the title, it was too sad. :fluttercry: Goodbyes are the worst, like when the doctor left a message in the TARDIS in the season one finale of the doctor who revival, damn that was sad. :raritydespair:

Hnnngghh
The feels. Why won't they stop?

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The Doctor plays the heartstrings on your feels very well.

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