• Member Since 18th Mar, 2012
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xxGamer101xx


Just some random person on the internet that writes stories about a show with ponies. I try not to suck at writing. Am I good at it? I don't know. I just do it for fun.

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After getting their Cutie Marks, the Crusaders never really did anything much. Soon, they drifted apart. But what happens when Scootaloo finds their old clubhouse...

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Comments ( 228 )

awww. that was such a sweet story :) Sooooo much D'awwwwwwwww!!!! :unsuresweetie: :scootangel: :applecry:

Nice, I kind of feel like I've read this before, but it's different... anywho... I like it:pinkiesmile:

410379
Thanks....I was kind of going for the D'awwwwwwwwww thing

I remember reading a small comic that just about went like this. :unsuresweetie: Did you use that as a reference or something?

it felt like it was going fast. like extremely fast. i felt like you could have slowed it down a bit and added some detail.

410400
Eeyup =D
You get a cookie my good sir

*Reminisers* it's an m not n. other then that great story.

410407
This is like my second story, I'm still getting used to this. Sorry about that.

410408 Oh, why thank you. :pinkiehappy:

Also, two things. One, I enjoyed reading this. It's always nice to reconnect with a friend you haven't seen in a long time. No matter how far you go, it's always nice to remember your roots and the ones that tolerated you when you were young.

Two, I like your avatar. Cactuar FTW.

I really liked this. Gotta a little teary eyed while she was reminiscing. A few things, you should go back and look over your work (editing and what not). Other than that, great short story. Cutie Mark Crusaders! :applecry::scootangel::unsuresweetie:

410392 I think there was a fan-comic about exactly this topic. I think it ended with the phrase "I though ah built it to last"

I'll say this....Very Cute and Very good. All that really needs to be said.

I teared up. I can see this happening when they do get their cutie marks.

410525
When you think about...Yeah it can happen.

A well told, if rushed, story. I found the comic this is based from also, I choked up a bit the first time I saw it
http://veggie55.deviantart.com/gallery/33525968?offset=48#/d4czi1s

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Same..Sorry if it is rushed. I'm still getting used to writing fanfiction.

BR

Dawww... that's all I can say for now. The tone of the story isn't sad, its nostalgic.

410614
To some, it seems sad. There isn't a tag for nostalgia though...

BR

Okay. Its okay. I'm new for writing fics along with you. Tried my hand at writing sad, but it came wit...mixed reviews. If ya wanna check it out, its called FRIENDSHIP IS NOT A DRUG.

410642
Nice title...I'm trying to write a sad fic about Trixie...don't know how it will turn out...

410428 That's what it was!!!!

Almost good, but it definitely needs some changes. A couple of sentences don't even make sense, and are just a seemingly random combination of words. Give more details on how they got their cutie marks. It just needs a good clean up and you'll have a decent story here.

BR

410670 Haha yeah. I came up with it when in school, at an anti-drug class. Is that irony? I think so.:rainbowlaugh:

410676 my memory is better than I thought it was

Daww... This one is sooo sweet... Much better than my CMC fic.

This should be muuuuch much longer. This sort of concept doesn't lend well to such a sparse one shot. :( It's alright, though.

Nothing like childhood memories washing over you like a well needed shower :twilightsmile:

I laughed a couple times. But this isn't a comedy.
What's wrong with me?

410896
Depends...what DID you laugh at?

410906
"What are you a dictionary?" and "CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS REMINISCERS"

YOU! MY DEAR BRONY! HAVE WON THE INTERNET!

Seriously though, while I read this, I imagined them in their older forms with the voices of there older sisters (Might as well call RD Scoots' unofficial negligent sister). I enjoyed the idea of those being their older voices. It's like saying they grew but they became what they loved most: Family.

Such a nice story. Now I feel like I have to write a heartwarming story since you got a fuckton of views, thumbs, and comments.

Also: "Sometimes I'm lucky to laid back parents." Said Scootaloo.

And I accidentally the noun, Scoots. Just irked me. Should read "... to have laid back..."

One more: reminiscence or in their case, "reminisceners."

Still a nice story.

Mr. Masato/Arby Works.

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Whoops...thanks for catching that

411290

Yer welcome. Always nice to help a fellow author.

Nice, reflective on life, and with a lesson that nothing is ever truly gone. Well written, a bit too fast-paced, but still understandable. You have managed to capture, in text, what someone feels when they meet an old friend.

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Thank you my good sir.
Hear is a cookie for your troubles.
*Gives Cookie*

That was real sweet story. It reminded me of that comic by Veggie. *teardrop*

You deserve every internet in the world!!!!!
also Cutie Mark Cruscaders' comments:

Sweetie Belle: Aw that's such a sweet story :unsuresweetie:
Scootaloo: This is awsome! :scootangel:
Applebloom: Ah can't hold all 'em tears! :applecry:

that was a good, short, story. really awesome though at the same time! but, it is 4:56 am right nowa, so my mind could not properly comprehend this as much as i can regularly. ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz....

your story, has gotten an automatic fave from me. :fluttercry::raritycry:

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