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Since their banishment to this world centuries ago, Adagio, Aria and Sonata have been traveling, looking for a way to go back to Equestria.
One day after using their powers, they get accused of witchcraft. Chased by the authorities and the population, they must escape to avoid a horrible death.

(Takes place a few centuries before Rainbow Rocks.)


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Welcome to the 1600's motherbuckers!

Oh, snap. :rainbowderp: I always wondered how things were for the Dazzlings back then, especially for things such as accusations of witchcraft.

Only found one mistake, more instead of most mist

5606043 Thanks for pointing it out; I've corrected it :)

When is chapter two coming?

~Azalea

5612038 Probably during the week-end.

I like this. There really need to be more stories about what the Sirens were doing over the past few centuries.

You know somehow the people are right..

Welcome to the madhouse, Dazzlings...

My guess is she's going back to the inn for one of her stupid toys. Oh Sonata, you just always find ways to get into trouble. :facehoof:

Exactly what time period does this take place at in our history?

5656981 In my mind, it takes place around 1500.

For some reason, I imagine the guards to look like the ones in Tangled.:rainbowderp:

Adagio and Sonata were still asleep.

*Aria

When she reached the bridge, she encountered a small white dog wandering by the river. She stopped. It was so cute that she got an urge to pet and hug it. After all, Aria wasn’t there to stop her and claim she was wasting time.

Simultaneously, she got an urge to grab the dog by a leg and suspend it over the water, threatening to drop it, just to see its reaction. Wouldn’t that be fun? After all, Adagio wasn’t there to stop her and complain that she could get them in trouble.

YES! Yes! This, this is how you write Sonata! Very well done characterization one unfortunately doesn't see often with her. :pinkiehappy:

She took a deep breath and reluctant resumed her journey.

*reluctantly

5688497 Oops! Thanks for the corrections. And I'm glad you like how I write Sonata!

Sonata, as much as I appreciate your kindness and thinking about your sisters' belongings too... YOU DUMMY!!!

When she reached the bridge, she encountered a small white dog wandering by the river. She stopped. It was so cute that she got an urge to pet and hug it. After all, Aria wasn’t there to stop her and claim she was wasting time.

Simultaneously, she got an urge to grab the dog by a leg and suspend it over the water, threatening to drop it, just to see its reaction. Wouldn’t that be fun? After all, Adagio wasn’t there to stop her and complain that she could get them in trouble.

Y'know, after reading this fic, this version of Sonata has since been my headcanon.

I might have mentioned it already a few times, but it bears repeating: I really love this story. :heart:

Go on, Aria. Though you may find Sonata annoying, she's still your closest friend. :pinkiesmile: Go and save her.

5713536 Thanks, I'm really glad you like it. Since this is my first story, I wasn't sure how it would turn out. It makes me happy to know other people enjoy it. I hope you'll like the final chapter.

5714072 Thanks for all your comments. I'm glad enjoy my story enough to keep reading.

5717486 Final already? But but but there's so much left to explore! Whole centuries worth of backstory to the Sirens! Ah well, I guess I can see this particular story ending with them leaving the town after they succeed at their doing rescue of Sonata. Still, I'm enjoying the Medieval setting so much and would love to read more about how the Sirens lived through the past millennium.

“Well, in fact I asked for three of them. But Adagio made us leave the city before the others were finished.”

That's so sad! :raritydespair:

Alright! it was a good ride dude!:rainbowdetermined2:

“We have to stay hidden until she ship departs,” Adagio said as she stood next the door

I think you mean "until THE ship departs". But great ending to a great story! :twilightsmile:

And while she ran, she couldn’t help but think that what she just did was a horrible thing.

Eh, she can easily rationalize it along the lines of "Those are all just inferior beings, barbarians who would burn each other at the drop of a hat. Better them than us."

She grabbed the rope tied around Sonata’s chest and sawed through it with her knife, slashing fiber after fiber, while from the corner of her eye, she saw Adagio rejoin the plaza and approach Midnight Storm

This sentence is missing a period. Maybe it's pregnant.

That was a really nice story, which is especially great considering it's your first one. I'll keep my eye on you and hope for more historical hijinks with the Sirens. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks for the corrections. And I'm glad you liked the story :)

I'll keep my eye on you and hope for more historical hijinks with the Sirens.

Unfortunately I don't have any ideas for other Dazzlings stories in the past (I just have some ideas for post-RR stories).

5739690 Ah that's okay, I'll just keep bugging other authors for them. :trollestia:

Over already? :derpytongue2: This should totally be a series. Awesome story!

Man, this story has taken a turn for the feels. Excellent work!

This is really a fantastic story; I like your portrayal of the bond between the Sirens here. :twilightsmile:

6041634 Thanks for the comments; glad you liked it!

6042514 No problem; you did a very good job on this!

6189460 Thanks a lot for taking the time to review my story! You can post the review in the thread: http://www.fimfiction.net/group/204860/helping-hooves/thread/183667/review-request

What medieval place they're in? France, England, Hungary, Holy Roman Empire, Papal States, Republic of Venice,

Republic of Pisa, Republic of Genoa, Duchy of Milan, Castile, Aragon, Byzantine Empire, Portugal or Navarre?

But I am very sure that it can't be the Islamic lands like Almoravid Empire or the Taifa Kingdoms in Al-Andalus.

6609346 I purposely left it vague (the EQG world doesn't have to be our Earth, after all). But the research I did for this story was mostly about England, so it's mostly inspired by that.

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Ooh... well. At least I am not the only person around here to had suggested the idea about the Sirens were

already landed in medieval time and spread hatred throughout Europe and sometimes, Islamic lands in Africa.

There is a story named Adventures of the Sirens on Fanfiction. It's a bit similar to yours about the

medieval time. So you can go and read it, if you wanted and can.

This was really good, and just the right balance of they-love-each-other-but-they-hate-each-other.

And I spent the last chapter sitting there thinking burn the town to the ground, burn it to the ground, burn it to the ground... and then they did!

Nice job.

7558190 Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the story!

Yikes. You'd think Sonata would learn.

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