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Phoenix Warlord


A lover of Halo, Star Wars, Ponies, Fallout, and many things. Has many pony waifus. 1/2 of Warfire Writing Studios

Comments ( 16 )

Did not read it yet, but please don't put "a /bit/ of rape" in the description :P, its either rape or no rape amount hardly matters

She could ask Spike.

5705337 Well, I figured I'd put it on there just to be on the safe side. Better be safe than sorry right?

5705436 True. I'm sure he'd be willing to help her with her needs and whatnot. :moustache:

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On the contrary, BDSM is all about keeping control, for both doms and subs. The foundation of BDSM is consent. Each person has the right to lay out what they do and don't want, and for those desires to be respected without overstepping boundaries. It's a controlled environment to explore bondage, fantasies, etc.. Without consent, it is rape.

Rarity did not consent to the mannequin taking control. It ceased to be consensual when he did anyway, and therefore ceased to be BDSM. Rape is not BDSM. Rape is rape. Even rape fantasies are controlled by all participants. This was just rape.

As a longtime participant in BDSM, I can safely say that losing all control is not part of BDSM.

Comment posted by Noteful Symphony deleted Mar 15th, 2015

Not bad, not bad at all. This fic is quite similar to an idea I've had over a year ago and am trying to get comissioned right now. I'm not really a fan of present tense though, and you quit the fic right when it became fun, but still good nonetheless

How coincidental. I already read this, when I searched "self punishment" quite separately. Nice to know You two have written Rarity several times already ;3

Well, hot dayum. Rarity getting a little frisky. Thumbs up.

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Sorry if this is late, but thanks for the comment! Glad you enjoyed it!

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Thanks! Glad you liked it!

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'BLTN'...

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The main point, I think was that "a bit of" should be removed from the warning, not the rape part.

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