An alicorn never dies... not for long. There have always been the same number, and there always will be. Little did Twilight know, her coronation was no accident. It was ordained from birth.
But what will she do when Celestia dies? How will she approach the new Celestia-as-foal?
This story is CANCELLED. I abandoned writing it after the plot became hopelessly lost. I realized it was just too all over the place and trying to be too many things. I'm publishing it just as a curiosity, or perhaps because it might give other people ideas. This is an unrefined, unfinished early draft. Feel free to use parts or concepts of it in your own work if you'd like. It has been continued here: True Love Never Dies
Chapters (4)
The concept seemed interesting, not sure I want to read it knowing that it'll stay like this. (Cancelled I mean)
5571641
Yeah... sorry about that.
But hey, at least I'm up front about it rather than abandoning the fic halfway through like some authors do.
Cancelled?
Watch as it hits featured under assumption of it being a gimmick.
~Skeeter The Lurker
5571650
No no no, I didn't mean anything bad by it, I just meant I could get hooked
5571650
I don't mind reading cancelled or abandoned stories, and the premise here looks fascinating. Top of the Read Later list!
BTW, I see a Romance tag - what will the ship be?
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Heh, not likely. I submitted it in the middle of the night.
5571690
Oh... well, read at your own risk, then.
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Oh, Twilestia, of course.
5571948
I did.
Uhh, but you just posted it?
Why would you submit a story, and then suddenly decide you don't want to write anymore?
I'm confused.
5572117
I decided not to finish it ages ago. (Usually, I never post incomplete fics. In this case, I think it's okay as long as there's a clear warning.)
It has been sitting on my hard drive for over a year now... I just figured I'd throw it up here in case anyone enjoyed it or got inspired by it.
This story is not bad. 1 problem is that Princess Celestia reincarnated immediately. It should take 11 months. If you continue, the 1st thing Princess Twilight Sparkle should do is find the Alicorn of the Earth. They definitely could have used the Alicorn of the Earth, considering that a volcano took out Canterlot.
5572565
Really, though, hunting down the alicorn of earth was the next step in the story, actually. But yeah, there are just too many problems with this story for it to be salvaged.
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another pony's thrash is another pony's treasure.
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And that's why I published it.
Maybe it will be someone's treasure. Heck, maybe someone would even want to finish the rest of the story.
Whyyyyy?!
Sorry, I don't want to be rude or anything, but- THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS I'VE EVER READ AND IT'S CANCELLED!!!
Hehe...I think I might be a tad bit over-emotional.
6234082
Heh, yeah... I cancelled this one because the plot was starting to wander all over the place aimlessly, there was just too much trying to squeeze into it. And I'd left it unfinished for many months... when I finally came back to it, I realized how fundamentally flawed it was and couldn't deal with finishing it.
You could write the ending for it if you want. ^.^
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Well, I thought it was pretty good!
But, that is totally understandable! I know from experience that when you lose interest in/ give up on a story you wrote, it becomes a chore to continue writing it.
I'd give it a shot, but... I feel like I'd ruin it, you know? It just wouldn't be the same if I wrote it. You are an amazing author, and I wouldn't feel comfortable trying to fill your shoes. (Plus, I'd probably somehow turn it into a TwiLuna story
That being said, if anybody does decide to continue it, I would be very interested in reading it.
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Well, at least I'm glad that somebody got to enjoy what I put into it. That means it was worth publishing it here.
6238570
Well, yeah. A story is always worth publishing. That way you can get feedback and suggestions on how to make it better.
Plus, I'm pretty sure I'm not the only person here who enjoyed it.
6240406
Heh, yeah. I guess 15 people enjoyed it.
6240416
Yep.
And I'm sure if anyone else came across it, they would enjoy it too.
Sshh...
I was never here.
6745857
Um... okay.
6236710 Um...now that I think about it, would it be okay if I rewrote the first four chapters, and the then published any remaining chapters? I mean, if not I completely understand.
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Sure, go for it! ^.^
You could even enter it into my contest if the word count was within the limit and you got it done fast enough.
6974802
Oh! Thank you so much! I think thats a good idea
6976071
I guess it didn't work out.
8011317
Huh... Cake Flank did write that ... did they delete it, though?
8011694
Yep; and apparently it wasn't completed, sadly.
8011974
What!? Someone has been archiving Fimfic! This is magical!