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Finally, Roseluck's special project is complete. Now, it's time for her to request an audience with Princess Luna, and see if her rose really does give her luck.
A short and sweet one-shot ship. Thanks to the overwhelming popularity of this pairing, I'll definitely be making a sequel! As always, I adore getting comments, the more specific and prolific, the better.
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Great story, no typos
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Nice!
They're... not posting in order.
You promised short and sweet and you delivered. Excellent work! I couldn't find anything that felt wrong to me. It was an enjoyable read and worthy of an upvote and a favorite!
4933168 Illuminati!
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Thanks!
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Aha! I knew it!
Well, description says it all. Short and sweet. (Also, hopefully sequel.)
Absolutely nothing to complain about in the technical department. The pacing is good, and the descriptions are nice. And, of course, the pairing alone makes this worthy to read for me. So, all in all, a good read.
Beautiful story, with a pairing I've never seen before. It was a sound theory, and absolutely magnificent execution. I only spotted one mistake (a lowercase r when you were writing Rose's name) which is such a rarity I must have barely ever seen it. Excellent pacing, descriptions that really made it come to life, and the beginning was incredible. The end when Rose thought she wouldn't get to give Luna her rose nearly had me in tears, and I was cheering by the time Luna kissed her. Very moving for such a short story, and excellent writing. Completely worthy of my upvote and favorite.
I enjoyed this story quite a bit, it deserves much more attention.
I really enjoyed this story. It wasn't paced too fast, and Rose had a very real reaction.
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Thanks! Of all the stories I've posted today, this is one of my favorites.
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Thanks! And I fixed the typo.
4933543 No problem!!
*Squees* Oh I so hope this gets popular for a sequel. It's cute, heartwarming, evokes just the right amount of feels, and is just a truly enjoyable read. Seeing something more than a oneshot would be great, that and Rose Luck doesn't get enough love.
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^.^
I squee a lot reading this one, too.
I really hope there will be a sequel. Not too many romance stories with Roseluck.
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I just like this story too much.
I may have to.
Hopefully the sequel won't ruin it.
This was a beyond wonderful story. It's not often you see either of these shipped in any story, so that was refreshing. I don't think it should have a sequel though, and not because it's not good. By leaving this without an ending, it lets the reader speculate about what happens next, which is kind of nice. Plus, the sequel to this couldn't really be more than, "Roseluck and Luna went on a date. The end." unless you created an entirely new story plot. You know what they say, less is more. My personal policy is to never do a sequel unless I've written the first story planning for that.
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Oh of course there would have to be an entirely new plot!
Every story needs conflict.
4933926 I haven't seen too many romance fanfictions killed by a sequel. Come to think of it, I haven't seen ANY(so far, anyways) that have. As long as it isn't on hiatus for months.
i would read a great deal of this.
very nice.
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Go forth, intrepid new ship. Sail forth and prosper. .
This was really good and I would love a sequel.
It takes an awful lot to get me to comment on a story, but this just was just too good to pass up. Everything about this story was top notch. The only thing I noticed was when Luna first came up and complimented Rose's rose, she replied,
So, unless that was intended since it was stated that she mumbled it, then I do believe that is what the kids these days are calling a typo. Other then that, this story is absolutely amazing, have a like and a fave! And an obligatory emoticon:
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Intended, actually.
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I'd love one, too!
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Yes, yes it shall.
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Thanks!
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Well, we can hope. ^.^
Still, though, I think doing the sequel up to the same standards would be very challenging.
This story was absolutley lovey. The fact you made a pairing I've never seen before work so well is great. It was also short and very sweet which I like. I love Roseluck personality. I WILL DEMAND MORE!!!...please?
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I intend to make more at some point.
I was kind of worried that this would turn into "A Rose for Emily". I was pleasantly surprised that it didn't.
4935711 I'd suggest making it a sequel. This is just too perfect by itself.
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Of course not!
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Definitely.
4935820 Some of your one-shots are quite nice.
This was sweet. I would like to point out, though, that there shouldn't be any need to get a rose to 'breed true'; they reproduce excellently from cuttings.
I found it a little long to begin, but once it's done... It was really, really sweet. Nice job :)
That was beautifully sweet. At one point I was thinking, "Things are developing awfully fast here... Would Luna really react so affectionately so quickly?", but then the reveal that Luna sort of knew Roseluck from her dreams explained that little bit away.
I enjoyed it. I would like to see more. But whether you continue this or not it is still a delightful one-shot short.
Sweetness overload....GAAAH I NEED A SEQUELL. REALLY
Please, do accept my congratulations on being featured today!
P. S. Would that be popular enough for a sequel?
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Thanks!
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Well, yeah. Still, that's why she needs to be careful with it, right?
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Thanks!
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Oh, I think I'll have to continue it now.
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I'm pretty sure there will be one.
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Double featured! https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/371027/super-squee-i-finally-did-it-the-double-feature
Yes, yes I think that would.
I have decided now to temporarily leave TwiLuna and join the legions here chanting for a sequel. SEQUEL!
Aww...
You're on a roll with the featured stories aren't you? That was adorably sweet and...wait a minute...
One of these things is not like the other!
4937107 Fish metaphor.
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Okay, okay!
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Indeed. I've been saving up stories to publish for a while.
This was one of the ones that waited the longest.
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Okay, you've lost me now.
4937387 I think I lost myself for a bit. Look into the trashcan with me? I'm hoping to find some buried treasure. ...Of course, I found some delicious fried fish at a restaurant called 'Trash Can'...or some other colloquies.
I approve of this union!
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It is lovely, isn't it?
I would like to make a formal request for a sequel. Is there a form that I need to fill out to make it official?
This story has everything I like. It has a unique idea, it is very well written, and it is sweet without being too sappy. In short, it is perfect. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Sure:
Thank you for the form. It makes me feel good, knowing my request will be official.
Requesting: X Sequel / __ Chapter update
Name: Random_User Date: 09/01/2014
Urgency: (please use only one)
__ If you feel like it
X Pretty important
__ I need it!
__ NOW!
__ OMZG! MUST HAVE MORE RIGHT NAOW!
Emphatic: (please use only one)
__ kthnxbye
X :3
__ I love you!
__ MOAR!
Signature: Random_User Witnessed by: Davenport (Official Notary of Ponyville)
I love authors with a sense of humor. I cannot wait to see what you come up with in the second installment. I almost chose the "I need it!" option, but I did not want to seem too pushy.
The entire gardening world has pined for a blue or black rose since the beginning of time. While it never occurs naturally, its interesting to see what hard world and careful breeding can do. :)
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Still waiting on a violet and black one.
LunaXRoseluck ship? I shall read this...