After a millennium of imprisonment, Princess Luna has returned, yet not in her entirety. A significant shard of her essence remains lost, shrouded in darkness. The darkness that gains the power to corrupt, to twist the very fabric of reality.
Princess Luna finds herself in an unfamiliar world, her own mind struggling to adapt to the changes around her. Who can she trust and what unseen powers have waited for her to return?
Let the unfolding tale reveal the answers she seeks!
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Hi thanks for checking out my story! This story will focus on different characters along the way, but the main focus will be Luna and her struggles. 🌛 Please let me know if you have any advises/comments on my writing or story plot thx!
Chapters (5)
Were there supposed to be a couple images in this? They show not but errors.
That said, this is an interesting premise. Send more.
Also, whoever did that cover art makes amazing cover art.
Little confusing, but what a start!
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My first work), I'll try to write more clearly and will probably fix the Prologue if I have time, ty!😁
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Ty 4 the comment)
I generated several images to represent what's happening in the story since my English isn't the best so decided it would be better to explain the situation/desc with images (using DALL·E 3*), I'll try to fix the issue but can't figure out how to make the images to show up.
p.s The cover art was done by DALLE 3 as well
Well this is gonna be interesting I can tell, although I don't really know why so many people have Celestia yell Luna after she is banished I mean why would you do that if you're the one who did it and you're the one at fault?
I like it and I want to see more chapters of this!
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Thank you 😁, I will publish the first actual chapter by the start of next week once I have less uni work.
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I hope you will all like it once you see the story bit more)
Regarding Celestia's cry for Luna, I have a small plotline for this event. That I think I will write about wayyy later on, but for now, I don't really have a written plan for this. I'm sort of just placing everything on the page so I could interact with it in the future, or until I finalize my storyline at least until the mid. of the story plan.
My personal opinion as to why it would be more 'realistic' or expected from Celestia to cry for Luna, would be purely because of the shock and realisation of what happened. The entire timeline of MLP isn't fully explained (tho I only watched the show until season 5 so i don't know, I'm currently re-watching everything with my younger sister and will hopefully finish it by Xmas), but lets say they are both above two thousand years old at the very least? SO I would conclude it would be a shock for Celestia to lose somepony she had for so long by her side. I did read some other writers viewing Celestia's connection to the elements of harmony as unstable, therefore she had no ability to influence what they would really do to Luna, let alone get rid of NMM , but this will be discussed later...
Caddie isn't alabaster. She's very much a pink.
Still an interesting read.
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Oppps, ima fix that now D
Ty for noticing!
Look like Luna needed strength training!
i.imgur.com/LY4eVqY.png 11743758
https://imgur.com/a/OucONFt
I hope Luna takes appropriate steps to recover.
"Talk wisdom, you do. Hmm!"
A small green space monk goblin
A new chapter!
It's a nice addition to the other chapters.