Military pegasus that enjoys ponies and human x royalty. You have been warned!
Devin Hall had a good life back on Earth. Just graduated college, steady job, and loving family. But when he is accidentally summoned by Princess Twilight Sparkle, the human will find out that war has many battle fronts in which to fight along with something worth fighting for.
Human X Celestia love story. I don't know, just felt like writing this. Let's see where this goes!
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Just read your story and it seems interesting. Let me know when chapter 2 is posted.
Ohmuhgerd! A human going to Equestria and saving urybody and romancing a animal waifu! Such creativity will surely get this Featured.
8782682 I don't know why but almost every story I glance at, you are in the comment section. I take it you do this on a daily basis?
8782714
Gotta agree with him though, the story concept is way to cliche for it to be any good.
8782714
I think he is just a troll. Wouldn't worry too much about him.
8782714
You have no idea
8782958
Awesome story btw! Will there be a flashback to when he first got to Equestria?
8782958
>well...he's a troll!
That sure showed me. But if this "story" isn't like one of it's many clones infesting the site, do tell how. I'm not above admitting I'm wrong.
8782714
I read the schlock that pops up on the front page and sometimes in the suggestion box.
8783257
You cyberstalking me, creeper?
Before I read the story I can already say I hope something happens that makes him live as long as Celestia and I'm not talking about the powers, then I hope that Celestia is planning to treat him like her equal and not "you can't do that, your not allowed to help their and whatever if they really enter a relationship.
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Nope but you just admitted to it.
This wasn't so bad this time, but yes as usually I wish they wouldn't have such an easy time to make them blush.
aaahhh you thought about that, okay now I don't mind it at all.
That story could be better than I thought, even if I want to read, sometimes to start a story can be pretty difficult.
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I wasn't trying to 'show' you anything. I was merely stating what I think you are from the comment you have given. And besides, a lot of people actually like the sort of stories that you don't like. So I am sorry if it isn't your cup of tea. I'm not pretending this story to be one of a kind or anything. Just writing something that I enjoy as well as others.
8783546
It's a form of slang, dingus. It's usually used as a response to an ad hominem fallacy, though other uses are possible under the right circumstances.
>your cup of tea
Look, unless you're Asian or a cringy fedoralord/weeaboo, that phrase doesn't really translate well when men are talking. Try to avoid using that in RL.
8783546
But this isn't real life? This is the internet. And yes, I am actually Asian in real life. Got those dank math skills too. But seriously, it seems you just came here to start drama or just be an ass. I respect that you do not like the type of stories that I write, but please don't post silly little comments while trying to get a rise out of me or someone else. It makes you seems childish and immature.
Granted, those are all nonsenient animals.
Doubt the same applies to sentient aliens (or whatever), hypothetically speaking.
8783588
You replied to the wrong comment, newgaf. If you're responding to someone, you hit that funny looking >> symbol opposite their name, not the one opposite yours. Lurk moar and learn a little before posting.
8784259
I was on my phone when I made that comment so my hand probably slipped and hit the wrong one. Though I can see now that you are not going to add anything constructive to the comments section of this story. So I ask that you please stop posting unless it is constructive criticism. Also, the fact that I replied to your comment right the first time should have been an indication that I probably just hit the wrong button by mistake.
Humans invented cryptography and humans break cryptography.
8784313
Don't be fooled, he has a bad habit of using deflection whenever he's called out on things. In this case, you called him out on his being an ass for the sake of starting drama -you're right by the way, I've seen him comment on plenty of stories, and it's always insults and/or antagonistic shitposts for the sake of trolling- and he responded by pointing out an unrelated mistake rather than actually refuting your claims.
You better look for an image, it will better advertirse this, and also, thanks for the celestia ship, i got tired of the massive luna and rainbow ships years ago.
I like it, he already seems skilled enough as to not giving Celestia the whole spotlight. (not sure to say it otherwise, I just woke up)
That was a nice chapter and funny in a way. I could image why Celestia starts to love him later if he keeps that up.
I actually kind of hope that Celestia is the one to act first on her feelings, but maybe there is a way for him to figure out her feelings and giving her a chance with a date.
I would like to see that he maybe treats her like someone normal in the future, why she maybe wants this, I could also image it to make her a bit angry or irritate her for some reason.
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honestly that was something that was always wondering me too. Why the humans never make the difference between sentient and nonsentient ponies/creatures if they say something like that. Sometimes I feel like that would have made sense in the story too.
A little fast, but a great chapter nonetheless!
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As soon as he disregarded my argument and made the comment about me accidentally replying to myself, I knew there was no point in arguing any further with him. He seems like a troubled individual with nothing better to do apparently, though that's ok. He can live his life the way he wants too. Doesn't bother me at all.
I see a ship on the horizon
I hope he stays with Celestia if he if that was meant to be the shipping here. It doesn't always have to end in Celestia and Luna sharing her partner and maybe even doing more together than that. If they have to share them, what I don't hope for, at least make it so that they take turns and don't have to sleep with each other too because of their human lover, there are already enough stories like that out there.
Well I liked this chapter. It is kind of refreshing till now, but I guess at some point something like them going into a never ending war is going to happen with no day going by without them having some sort of stress.
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Do not worry, I do not plan on changing the shipping in this story. It will still be Human X Celestia.