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TwilightUCrazy
Romantic purist, lover of creativity, admirer of writers, and a second pair of eyes. Also a lunatic who randomly bites people to smell what their screams feel like. Happy reading!
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Gosh.... this gave me a decent laugh. Wasn't as cloppable as most stuff, which makes it a light read into a erotic novel. I love how you don't use the word 'sex' for every body fluid and hormones that comes out, and that makes it rather enjoyable to read.
For a short like this, the only thing I can say to improve on are the parts here.
Try to refrain from one-sentence-paragraphs. Just add like a line or two after to describe it and it'll do fine.
Also, add 'comedy' tag. But as most people would say, humour is subjective.
Twilight doesn't know about lesbian sex? Damn, she is closeted.
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Yeah, yeah. It has AppleDash and it sucks. You weren't exactly the target audience, though.
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Not sure if there's enough funny for it to qualify as "comedy".
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Just fucking with ya, dude.
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Pun intended?
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Possibly...
WELP. Certainly a way to start things off!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Cliche.
I have a feeling somepony is going to show Twilight how wrong she is.
And that's when the others decided Twilight needed some extra special lessons!
I thought for a sec that Fluttershy would then secretly go and write a clop story as "Rose Papillon".
Woooo...
Crazy hot good stuff there my friend.
Ahem
I really did enjoy the
plotstory here it was fun and funny. The characters felt true to them selves. And it was a good read....
... I did like the not so storyish parts too
oooh pinkie
you silly filly you! Hahaha
There's a lot of funny moments strewn here and there that make the whole story an even more enjoyable read. I mean just look at the adorkable ending:
Lol-boners were had this day because of this story huehuehue
Great read sir, props to you
I may not be into clopstuff, but thats just fun to read XD
Umm....is twilly gonna.....you know..... Next part? I mean... Like the way she was like "don't you?" Was like she was gonna be like "GET OVAH HUR AND LET MEH WRECK DAT ASS BIACH!" And I was like
.......DA fuck....
And the I was like
Very enjoyable, please write more...
A good read! Thoroughly enjoyed it. More soon?
Poor Twilight one of her friends should help her out.....
Eeyup....
More. More. More. I wanna hear more stories about me fucking Applejack! It's way too cool for them to just stop! Come on, More stories from my favorite pony!
6224189 I totally agree!
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Uhhhhh... perhaps later.
P.S This is my FAVORITE Clopfic, it's awesome, lol.
That was bucking great !!!!
bready gud. I think RD would probably win really is she really used everything to her advantage. Course AJ 'winning' is a win for her as well, and a chance for a rematch ;3