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Sora, the chosen wielder of the Keyblade, finds himself in a world he's never seen one filled with talking ponies and creatures he's never deemed imaginable. He meets six ponies who represent the six elements of friendship in a town called Ponyville. He and his six new pony friends must find a way to stop a spreading darkness in this strange new world.

Chapters (30)
Comments ( 46 )
Comment posted by darkssa deleted Dec 15th, 2014

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I'm aware. But thats not the point.

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Lol nope. What have you thought about the story?

Comment posted by DragonEmeraldKeyBladerXZ deleted Jan 8th, 2015
Comment posted by DragonEmeraldKeyBladerXZ deleted Jan 8th, 2015
Comment posted by DragonEmeraldKeyBladerXZ deleted Jan 8th, 2015
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Comment posted by DragonEmeraldKeyBladerXZ deleted Jan 8th, 2015
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Comment posted by DragonEmeraldKeyBladerXZ deleted Jan 8th, 2015

not a bad start sir/ma'am, not bad at all

just the shear awkwardness of this chapter makes me laugh.

"Well, no offense, but I think it could have made a better choice. You know, the coolest pony in Ponyville maybe?"

what woulda been funny here is if RD tried to grab it and it teleported back to sora.

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So in other words pulling the Jack Sparrow card?

Then the author certainly did a god Job!:pinkiehappy:

Please tell me the Mane 6 are not Keyblade Wielders. That's one of my major turn-offs for Kingdom Hearts stories.

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Not in essence, no. I gave them the ability to wield them when connected to Sora's heart, but if Sora isn't around, or not in the world, they can't. In essence, Sora ALLOWS them to use keyblades at minor points in the story, kind of like when Roxas let Xion use his Keyblade.

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In fact, I don't think I even let them use them at any other point in the story.

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Except they aren't actually their Keyblades. They are an extension of their connection to Sora.

Not bad is right. But, do you think you could've added in music from kingdom hearts, as well as most images.

6931313 I am not an artist, and I feel having to click a bunch of links for music disrupts the flow of the story. I leave it to the imagination to visualize it.

Comment posted by Moon loving Changeling deleted May 6th, 2016

I love these chapters alot

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