Night Light's life is boring. His schedule is work, eat and sleep. Work, eat and sleep. It's been like that for him for years.
Now he's heading back home after a busy day of working at a job he hates. He thinks it's going to be the same routine tonight but what he doesn't know is that this night will be different from any other night before.
He get's knocked unconscious and wakes up in a mansion. Now he's trying to get out.
Cover art made by AeroCloud.
Nice job.
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You left out one final line:
Great story!
Calling it "Luna's moon" doesn't seem to fit since she had apparently faded from memory until Twilight had grown up and purified her with her friends.
Pacing felt a little.. abrupt. Don't know how to say it better.
Keep writing new things! Practice makes perfect!