...wat?

i bet twilight cant wait for rarity to have her period all over her

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I concur!

5263448
That's just gross. Blood is gross.

So that happened.

Very fun, and interesting. I like the take on embroidery. I like to imagine it alters the spell, resulting in entrapment or canceling it, but one that doesn't have an effect other than staying is different.

The site needs more clothing TF's You'd think Rarity would make a few outfits of her friends.

Aww, I wanted to see what her reaction was when finding the panties in her washing machine.

5263401 Proof that there is(n't) a God?

5263448
Ew. Ew. ENope.

Nice story! You better write that BDSM clopfic... or else!

GAHH!!!
Where is the "Next" button?
There needs to be one more.

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you people and your casual fetishes, can't even understand the glory of the period fetish master race

your imaginary gf will love you for eating her out on her period

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I have seen some shit but that is just ...

Down Boner, down boy.
No! Bad boner. Heel!

GOD DAMN IT BONER YOU'VE GONE TOO FAR THIS TIME!
*repeatedly smashes his boner between two Bibles*
GET. DOWN. DAMN. YOU!

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Kinky. ;)

5267037 agreed

5267099 Which version though? I have the feeling it would do more damage if it was one of the older KJV ones. Those things weigh like 15 lbs each, and are hardcover.

Also: What The Hell did I just read? FUH?

5267157 umm..... are you sure you replied to the right comment? I don't see how any of that relates to my comment

5267288 he was referring to the 2 bibles

5267288 Back along the whole chain, to the beginning. Sorry for the confusion.

Hilarious and sexy.

Most Excellent.

amazingly entertaining and pretty hot in some spots... did i mention those last few lines were fucking hot...

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u fkn wot call me a casul m8 i swer 2 christ ill fkn rek you so badly ull fly bak up ur mums vag u liddle shit

aaand found it by accident.....

bah , of course you end the sequel on a want for more as well.....

This was an awesome story. I thorroughly enjoyed it. Clothing TF honestly isn't something I personally would have come up with, but it works. I love the fact that the embroidery that Rarity stitched onto Twilight remained after she changed back, though it's going to be painful getting those stitches out.

For this, and the prequel combined, I rate 8/10

For this sequel, I rate 9/10

For the prequel, I rate: 7/10

Overall, great story, would love to see more of this stuff on this website.

is there a squeal to the squeal ?
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Whelp there is a new fetish I didn't know I had

Here is an idea what if for a sequel Rarity wants to try the spell herself. Also I wonder what the rest of the Mane 6 would look like transformed.