The night is dark and full of terrors, but the fire burns them all away.
Page generated in 0.148 seconds
Total duration
1,044 users online
1,920,339 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I can dig it
5359724
Yeah... First fic. Depending how things go... could be only...
Nothing has yet happened, so it's hard to tell how the story will go. From what I've seen though, the writing is decent. Here is hoping to reading more.
... Is it a DIAMOND Sword?
/shot
5370436
Nope. Iron. More iron than diamond in the minecraft world.
Well it's intriguing to say the least. I think I'll give this a chance and track it just see where it's going to.
5375031
I'll try not to disappoint. If you have a direction you'd like to see this go, let me know.
5375764 I prefer to give authors free hands with their storyline. Helps the writing feel natural. That said though, I can give you some advice. Stay away from OP villains. Seriously those need either some ridiculous Deus Ex Machina or seriously raping character growth. I have seen both happen and at least to me it ruins a story completely.
Then again I'm more of a slice-of-life reader.
5376562
then I got some good news for you, in regards to the OP villains: Link is not doing a 3 heart run. There will be growth, and his skill will improve. He will just have to take different enemies in different ways. I've got a few villains in mind. No spoilers though. I got the next chapter typed up, just waiting for monday. Then I'm almost done writing the one after, and that one still needs to be revised, edited, and typed.
This is one of those manipulates the word count to always be the same per chapter things isn't it? That just makes following it more painful, because the chapters are so short and only once a week
5386209
I swear it's been only coincidental. But between 2 days of editing, revising and typing, then writing the next chapter over the next 4 days after work before I crash on the bed. I will try to keep them consistent.
equestria is not the name of the planet its just one kingdom just like the griffon kingdom the minotaur kingdom the changeling hivelands and the demand dogs
5403797
*Diamond dogs. Also, fixed where I screwed it up.
you may need to fix that because one of those ponies is a
spydragon.5427879
Done.
Pinkie's randomness. Never gets old.
And AJ knows what Twilight wants since the bookworm told her. What will she get, only time will tell.
And I caught up. Good work.
Uh oooh.
the only issue i find is you keep saying a Triforce its the Triforce or the Triforce of Courage/Power/Wisdom.
its never was called a Triforce except in the poorly translated original game on the n.e.s but good job though.
5731206 Well, while you are correct, that it is called 'the triforce', not 'a triforce', it's not something he (navi) brings up in conversation casually. In fact, the only time it'll even be mentioned, is when he discovers it on his hand. And even then, when navi refers to it as 'the triforce', the word 'the' kind of rolls over their head as Triforce is the more important word. So saying 'a triforce' is just as well as 'the triforce'. I could be wrong. And if so, then I'll change it.
EDIT: Yeah, I was wrong. 'a' is a general. 'The' is a specific. I'm wrong, and ... Fixed ~_~
5731457 thank you for your hard work I've been an Zelda fan sence I was five and it hurts to see errors.
I smell something weird on AJ.
Very....weird...
pajamadeen.com/images/detective.jpg
Meh. Good work, though.
5733699
If it was wrong, please elaborate. You caught me unprepared for so strange a comment.
What is Derpy's inclusion to this?
5926389
I'm so happy you asked! The mask of truth let Link speak to truth stones in ocarina of time. It was derived from sheikahs, who also had this ability to some extent. Most sheikah were servants to royalty, or at least higher-ups. Derpy falls into this category, being employed by the city of Ponyville, and beyond: Working for royalty. She's here to help Twilight, but in a less up front manner than Link.
5927470
Huh. So you're saying that Derpy has some sort of Mask of Truth ability?
5929764
In a sense, yes. I'll be touching base on what's going on and why they have these non-canon abilities in the next chapter, so bear with me.
Cripes.
That was an ending darker than the Shadow Temple.
I liked it.
~Wywint
:D
Will Link learn the Sun's song from Celestia? That'd be neat.
~Wywint
Ah- So now we transition to Ponyville. Awesome.
~Wishy
Wouldn't Din's Fire be a little overkill for sending a letter?
*cough* Golden Gautlets *cough*
~Natz
Quickly- pull out a bottle and trap Navi in it! At least then you'll get two chances!
~Wywint
*gasp* But how can the Triforce exist if they're in Equestria?
Is Equestria the Sacred Realm?
~Natz
Hinting at TwilApple?
Bit much for hinting...
Well done, yet again!
~Wishy
5934252
On that, I'll have a lead up to it. This one chapter is set during the winter, so after summer and fall. A lot of hinting will be done from Twilight but Aj is like
5936921 Okay, I love the story, really good, but there is one thing that annoys me. It's not that I don't like the concept, nor that I don't like the two that you are using. It's that the concept is overused. The whole pairing the mane six together, or with another female. Almost everyone is doing it. :( That makes it less appealing. I want to see something different.
6030000
Then praytell, what do you suggest?
6033516 A straight couple isn't used, very often, and I have yet to read a story, where, instead of the mane six, there was a male couple, but I'm still going to read it. I was just putting my opinion out there. I hope you take my opinion into account, in a different story? I don't expect you to rewrite this one. Happy writing!
6034383
Well, then... I'm glad you enjoy it so far.
On a side note, I planned to have this ship be on the back burner, as well as another ship yet to be mentioned. The main focus here, story wide not chapter only, is Link depicted as a hero.
6035482 Thank you, and okay, sir. Enjoy writing it. ^w^
5403797 But at least Demand Dogs is funny!
Good work.
and there's the recurring line used in many zelda games. nice touch
I fully support this. Great job, and keep it up!
(I could almost hear Link sounding like Zero/Lelouch from Code Geass.)
~Wywint
SHHHH!
(It's a secret to everybody...)
Item Sack? *Check!
20 items, huh?
Can I blatantly assume that more Zelda references are in store?
-Buy Something, Will Ya?
-Damned Cucos
-CDI-References (My Boy, Squadalah, THE EVIL FORCES OF GANON, etc.)
And maybe some:
-Explanation as to why Full Hearts=LAZORZ
-Why the Hookshot doesn't break Link's arm (Game Theory FTW)
-Please don't make him have the damned Train just because Equestria has trains.
-Moar Magic
-Zelda Villans+MLP Villans (Ganon possesing Sombra)
~Natalie
Did you catch any of the others I put in there?
Two pockets of 20 each. Different equipment, and because "real world", various items for sustenance.
I'll see what I can do about them, maybe minus the Ganon bit. Maybe... Also, the leading supplier of chickens may have some task for him in the future...
Will cover.
Will co- ... Hmm... I'd have to think on that one.
This ain't no Spirit Tracks.
Of course. His weapons too. Will explain for sure.
Okay, so a bit more of an answer here: For some reason, the portal to Equestria made by Great Deku Tree left behind traceable magic when it closed. I bet you can tell what happened in the land of Hyrule... And if not, here's what happened: When Ganondorf gets to the tree, it leaks that the kid "fated to be the savior" isn't there. He opens the portal with the triforce of power (aquisition is explained), and finds himself in Equestria. Guess where...
And that's all for now. Have fun, and thanks for the morale boost!
Epona?!? What is she doing here in Equestria and not Hyrule? And was that tune "Epona's Song"?
Awesome.
Awesome awesome awesome.
~Wywint
6220189
(whistling)
Obvious Artemis Fowl reference is obvious.
Wait, it WAS a reference, right? to the fourth book? The Opal Deception? I think so.
I'm surprised no one else noticed it. Or are the fans of the series THAT much of a minority?