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Pinkie's randomness. Never gets old.
And AJ knows what Twilight wants since the bookworm told her. What will she get, only time will tell.
And I caught up. Good work.
the only issue i find is you keep saying a Triforce its the Triforce or the Triforce of Courage/Power/Wisdom.
its never was called a Triforce except in the poorly translated original game on the n.e.s but good job though.
5731206 Well, while you are correct, that it is called 'the triforce', not 'a triforce', it's not something he (navi) brings up in conversation casually. In fact, the only time it'll even be mentioned, is when he discovers it on his hand. And even then, when navi refers to it as 'the triforce', the word 'the' kind of rolls over their head as Triforce is the more important word. So saying 'a triforce' is just as well as 'the triforce'. I could be wrong. And if so, then I'll change it.
EDIT: Yeah, I was wrong. 'a' is a general. 'The' is a specific. I'm wrong, and ... Fixed ~_~
5731457 thank you for your hard work I've been an Zelda fan sence I was five and it hurts to see errors.
Obvious Artemis Fowl reference is obvious.
Wait, it WAS a reference, right? to the fourth book? The Opal Deception? I think so.
I'm surprised no one else noticed it. Or are the fans of the series THAT much of a minority?
'Artemis Foal, The Diamond Deceit. By Eoin Colter'
5731457 caught that one right off the bat. Nice series.
As to Pinkie's "broken fourth wall," I present to you...
State name and rank.
Had to think about this one for a second but I would hazard to guess it's a Barnes and Noble reference? I don't know if I've seen an author with more constant and seamless references than you, regardless. It shows that a lot of thought went into even the smallest details, and I have to say I like it.
Great story so far as well, very well done integration of the two worlds. It's a huge shame I found it so late rather than when my input might actually matter, but I can't complain about being able to spend time reading this without waiting for chapters.