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RarityEQM


Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem

Comments ( 18 )

Oh dear, Twilight. I guess it's true what the song says: "Good girls are bad girls that haven't been caught."

Cute and sexy as always.

You know, I had a really hard time enjoying the admittedly well done clop here because of the use of commas to indicate stuttering. Hyphens are your friend, my friend. People don't s,s,s,stutter they st-st-stutter. Commas are pauses in the flow, not connection like hyphens are.
Being that the author's note says that you wrote this in the middle of the night and posted it unedited, whatever, just take this advice under consideration for the future or any editing passes you make on this story.

There's an episode of the actual show titled Games Ponies Play.

5180273 Does that song have anything to say on nerd girls?

5181998 Have a look for yourself.

OOH YUS:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:fjkslska;fjkakl;afl;sajsd;ajsdalsaslfjsdljfksdjdsjfsdlllaklfaljfjfla

Good stuff :pinkiesmile:

NO SITE IN THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE IS ABLE TO GET ME THAT SONG, FRIGGIN INTERNET!!!!!

5194299
ERm...What song, darling?

Yay! Twixie! Also you're a girl, that's nice.

The one mooncalf posted with about Trixie and Twi, BRAH!

Great story. I love how eventually The Great and Powerful Trixie is begging Twilight to allow her to cum. I know this isn't a comedy but I couldn't help but laugh a little at how desperate Trixie was becoming.

Something something Fight Club.

Or, also, I'm drunk. Don't judge. Being a lady takes a lot of hard work and wine. Very very wine.
Friendship is Magic.

This is amazing
the story was already a 10/10
but this just pushed it to 10^38/10
that would be...
1000000000000000000000000000000000000000 / 10

I did greatly enjoy this and you have my approval. :ajsmug:

Ooh this is good. Thanks Lady Scarity for telling me!

6580973 I figured you might appreciate chapter two. ;)

Really nice job. I'd love to read more

Good cunnilingus scenes are hard to find, so big time kudos for that. The taunting dirty talk and the classroom scene was a lot of fun too.

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