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Genghis Clop


Conquering the world on horseback is easy; it is dismounting and governing that is hard.

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Was pretty good. Little disappointed by the lack of actual power play.

Well-written and fun. Surprisingly sweet, actually. I'm actually happy that no serious power play happened, because this felt like a more accurate portrayal of their characters.

Wat theres 13 stages of the exam XD

A few missing or misspelled words here and there, but overall a good story.

Where did you even find that photo its hilarious and...oddly intriguing :rainbowhuh:

>The moment you realize that cover art for clop fics are really stretching the limit with the no NSFW cover art rule

Nice work Genghis, really liked the anal play in this one :twilightsmile:

Wait. When did Trixie get unchained in order to finish Celestia? From what I read, only the blindfold was removed.

Man, that cover image is really pushing it.

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Please, people have been cropping straight up pony porn and getting on the front page. While annoying, it is how humans are wired. Unfortunately.

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I agree it is unfortunate Cadance, I only hope we see less clop in the featured box, so other stories thay have well written plot can be seen.

Uuuum... Twilight was very young when she took her entrance exam, I'm rather worried now.

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1. That was canon and this is very obviously AU.
2. See number one.

i was surprisingly bored by this....

While I was reading this, I could only think of that picture made by Siberwar (the one with the Twixilestia BDSM); it seemed to be the most relevant image IMO

So, every aspiring Filly and colt goes through this to join the school, huh? Creepy. :twilightoops:

Just a small thing, but will be noticed by others in the lifestyle as I am. When talking about a mistress in general, it is fine to leave it lower case, because it is in a general reference. When speaking of or to a specific Dom (male)/Domme (female) it would be Upper Case. Example. "That mistress over there" is fine. In other cases it would be "my Mistress" "Mistress Celestia" "your Mistress" "Yes Mistress" and so forth. You will notice in a couple examples that I left "my" and "your" lower cased. In the lifestyle the sub is always left lower case. Also when speaking to a Dom/Domme without using title, words like "You" or Your or You're" are capped. "i am Yours Mistress" "You are right Mistress" and so forth.

Hmm... I fail to see Celestia's fail. I expected her to do something stupid and embarrassing, since that;s what the chapter name implies. Maybe that's just me.

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