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Nice. First time I have seen an Alera crossover here. Looks well done.

I must say I was surprised, pleasantly so, by the awesome foursome. Am I correct in saying that the primary relationships are Sunset/Twilight and Rainbow/Applejack?

Apart from that I cannot remember at all what has happened by this time in the books and how old Tavi is.

As an aside I remember thinking that a certain antagonist fit quite well with a certain holey equestrian one.

Also, what will this mean for the updating of Benefits?

Can not wait for more pony loving and the Sunset Shimmer Fury Freedom Fighters.

Not bad, this is really interesting

Eh.... the crazy shipping ruins this for me.... Sorry but for me I can't really take a story seriously after reading something like that....

love what i am reading so far keep up the good work. ^_^ :twilightsmile:

Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?

too much shipping too fast, plus cant shake the feeling that rainbow dash is with applejack only because the collar

4915144 Thats pretty much how it is for all four of them.:facehoof:

another good chapter. ^_^ :twilightsmile:

win fury craft
*wind
Brencus," Tavi spoke up
*Brencis
you belong loser
comma
wore down to earth robes
to?
even more fierce disposition Rainbow
missed than
like a think piece of wood
*thick
Max's feature's weren't
*features
Yes Rainbow I know,
commas
her own bolder of a fist over
*boulder
into the nearby was basket
was?
branch of Roman decedents
*descendants
if your unconscious
*you are
Twilight sparkle paced
*Sparkle
to magic to learn
redundant to
four woman orgey
*orgy

that back a souvenir
as?
giantess moaned a wrapped
*and
told me you and Twilight
comma
Roman decedents
*descendants
pretend to be Dashie
comma
made Rainbow rolled her eyes
*roll
the old human worth
*world
was still breaking
*breathing
As soon as the entered
*he
deviant," the soldier before turning
missed said?
argue ass he got to work
*as she

again a wonderful chapter. ^_^:twilightsmile:

and she can do it to.:twilightsmile: Though I don't think Aj, Rainbow, or Sunset will be to pleased with this new development.

oh it just keeps getting better. ^_^ :twilightsmile:

I ginished reading chapter and straight away I saw chapter six had been posted :rainbowlaugh:

That was some seriously badass Twilight here!

Wow Twilight just got herself into a real mess.:facehoof: Well atleast she is strong enough to protect herself.:twilightsmile:

best chapter yet! i really hated that guy and his son in the book. :twilightsmile: keep up the good work. ^_^

Sooooo.......any chance of further chapters for Pony's Fury? This is a terrific story, & you've done an excellent job writing the Aleran characters (also, the Duel was utterly EPIC).

See, this is why you don't challenge the Adorkable Savant to a magic duel. :rainbowlaugh:

It's been an enjoyable read so far; I look forward to more if you choose to continue! :twilightsmile:

This is a seriously under-appreciated piece of work.

I ready hope it continues someday, but even if it doesn't; it's still awesome, and I'm grateful that it is here.

Really interesting idea, looking forward to how you will develop this. :twilightsmile:
(May also end up checking out those books, sound interesting. :pinkiehappy: )

Tavi frowned at the description, and there was an odd sound behind him, like a light screeching. However, when he turned to leave behind the other girls, nothing had fallen and the floor didn’t show any scrape marks. Although, he got the strange feeling that the horse statues were looking at him for some reason. Looking at him, and scowling.

Magical golems, just saying... :pinkiecrazy:

Rainbow Dash groaned. “You’re saying we should save this First Lord guy because if we don’t…our grocery bill will go up?”

Meh, better than some reasons you see out there. :derpytongue2::rainbowlaugh:

You’re kidding right?” she asked as they got up and began to leave. “Calculating the duration of a merchant ship's voyage or tracking the taxation payments of outlying provinces is just a bunch of stupid word problems revolving around basic addition, subtraction and multiplication. If they want to challenge me, they should have asked how much rainfall reaches the ground of a level two woodland area during a class three rainstorm with a wind factor of five and average humidity rating of eight when the rain is coming from a basic type one rain cloud that hasn’t been loaded with lightning.

:pinkiehappy: Brainy Dashy attacks! :pinkiehappy:

Varg stared at her for a moment, then took in a deep breath through his nose, and frowned. “You are not a demon. What are you doing here?”

Guess wolfman knows they are not human... :pinkiecrazy:
And the ending was awesome! Good work. :twilightsmile:

“Twilight Sparkle, I know,” the youthful-looking fury the talking horse had called a mean old lady said before she let out a sigh and looked around the room at the stunned guards, speakers, and pair of naked girls standing in the doorway that had been destroyed. “I am Alera. And if you'd just me a moment..."
Then the multi-element fury attacked everyone in the room with a storm of lightning from her hands.

Wow talk about talks breaking down... :pinkiecrazy:

Go Twilight! :pinkiehappy:
Pity she kinda of just threw all her plans to the wind. :derpytongue2:

This has been an amazing story so far and I truly hope you update it again soon. :raritystarry:
Awesome work, well done. :twilightsmile:

This story has been on my to-read list for awhile now. So glad I finally got around to it lotsa fun can't wait to see where you go next! Thanks for writing such an awesome story!

This chapter has my attention.

The ponies really have the whole holier than thou attitude going on here.

And the Alera informed Twilight that this was in fact not a first contact situation, and told her all of the secrets.

Trapping a pyromancer in a pocket of highly oxygenated air... that's actually sort of brilliant. Imagine it: your opponent goes to attack you, and then just explodes. So many hilariously overblown rumors about you would form, and it's an easy win.

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