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When was the first time?
4897378 I'll just leave this one to your imagination.
They should have read the character tags then, duh!
This is going to get featured soon for all those virgin horse fuckers to see
Well this was a fun read. The S&M at the end was probably overkill since they where just 'experimenting'.
Leave something for a possible sequel.
And I'm sure, Luna has more 'interesting' ways of sexual pleasure then, Rarity and Spike combined.
Them being, "A thousand years too young to hold a candle to one such as the Mistress of the Night".
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4900121 Well I'm happy with how it turned out. Don't get me wrong, I know it's nowhere near the high end of quality writing. But I think it's an improvement over any of my previous work.
4900453 No, you misunderstand me. The story is good, and the writing IS of the high end quality. Trust me, I read much, much, MUCH, worse, Spike stories before I just had to stop.
What I was say is, that in the story, you added more than what was really needed. A one night threesome has the key theme here. The S&M after the tiring sex was pushing it.
And with, Luna offering to do this again would leave something for sequel, if that's what you had in mind.
Oh, and when the thought of who to pick for a third partner came up, Twilight would have been better said to be more awkward then being related, if you want to have that be more believable.
Great story! Really enjoyed it. Spike's my favorite dragon and Luna my fav. pony and princess! Hope there's more stories like this to come!
4900553 Ah, I see. Well thanks for your suggestions and constructive criticism! I'm always looking to improve, and every comment helps.
Didja use mrs1989's older version on purpose?
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Nope. NOPE.
FUCKING NOPE.
This. was. amazing!....
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Love the story.
Ah, it's things like this that give me hope for humanities future.
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Maybe because the new one is kind of, no wait, very creepy and has an whole uncanny valley feel to it.
4904390 It's not bad, but Rarity is way too pink in the newer one. Just my opinion.
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I haven't read this, but I find meta humor in the fact that it's Spike with Rarity and Luna. So I guess Spike just likes anything with Tabitha St. Germain as a voice actress? lol
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You'll get used to it.
That last part...Do i sense a sequel thats a sequel yet not a sequel?
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4897557 Whoever wants a sequel,
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king that gravy boat from that episode.
That means he's f
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This was pretty impressive. Your really nailed the sex scenes and it felt realistic of a couple brining in a third party for the first time. My only real suggestion here would be that you weren't very descriptive of the orgasmic feeling sometimes. The orgasms are what the sex builds up to, so it really needs to be climatic. Still, it was a fantastic read.
If the wine was as rare and delicious as implied, that is very, very unfortunate.
That would be a choker.
Only twenty-plus comments for over ten thousand words of grown Spike having a threesome with two of the mares considered most desirable by the clop community. This fanbase is a crying, biased shame. It was very blunt and less than descriptive at times, but a good effort nonetheless.
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Hey. I just LOVE Sparity.
You can't take that away from me.
As Molestia once said, “So. Hawt!”
Oh. HELL. Yes. Not even close to what I was originally searching for, but more than worth my time. VERY well done!
(All things aside, though, what is UP with FIMfiction's search algorithm?)